I don't really get it. But its still a brilliantly written work. Awesome job.

This had me cracking up but had a real somber ending, I liked it that way.

The dialogue was real fast paced since you killed any of the description, it seems like a simple style but it worked really well for this situation. It was well worth the read.

Excellent grammar, spelling, and structure.
Your dialogue is natural and flows well. The start of the prose section is a little clunky, but overall this is good.

This is a great little snippet, Lynn-chan! I love how it shows that even the little kids are drilled with the 'its just the way it is' deal that Blue displays throughout the game.

And I actually feel sorry for that little pollen...hiding under a handmaid's dress... *sniffle* It was afraid, poor thing.

Hehe :)