I RARELY make the effort to come to this site. But I had found your story amoung the list of "recomendations" at

Your story was a joy to read. It was TOTALLY engaging and I loved you rmany plot twists. While I know I'll have to read it again with a japanese dictionary ( I'm not familiar with all the words used), I know I will enjoy the third, fourth and fifth read even more than the first!

Thank you for my "bright spot" of this day!

haven't finished reading but so far like what I've read. I've got to go now.

Your view of relationship and Sessrin is strangely quite similar to mine, even though we are writing with a difference of 4 years' space. Your story was recommended by a site, so I came to read it. Before reading this I actually started writing a Sessrin drabble themes (still ongoing) series that reflects similar views and thought you have on them. I also believe in hardships in relationships and the walls they have to conquer before knowing what they want. Esp. for Sessrin, they have inherent obstacles they need to address since they are of different species. Yes, I also cannot stand Sessrin fluffs where Sess become such a OOC lover and Rin all childish and innocent.

Except for the part about Seth thing, I was a bit thrown off but other than that I love your take on this story and mature handling of Sessrin. I know also about all the time and effort that goes into writing fanfic as a fanfic writer myself... Great writing!

this story was awsomw! i loved it!

I love this story...*tear tear*

Wow

Excellent story. The plot is quite well thought out and the characters are believably in character. A bit vague on details of some events, but I'm obsessed with details, so it's of no high concern You should be proud of this story.

i know you must have completed this a while back, and may not get many reveiws, but i think this is a lovely story.

i'm so happy you didn't go out of charcter. that is very annoying. it's a great story. thanks for sharing it with us.

bridget tescher

p.s. i'm not sure if you realize this, but you have sesshoumaru's name spelt incorrectly...

Pretty enjoyable!

I started reading and I just could not stop. I usually do not read pg 13 fics because I want that exploding hentai moment of gussyness.

Rin/Sess are one of my favorite anime couples.

And I must say I loved your story. The way that you let sess display emotion without making him look soft and gave a grown up perspective of rin without losing her innocence or making her to childlike. You should consider writing more fics, I was a little disappointment so see that you only wrote one sess/rin fic.

Absolutely beautiful! I totally skipped doing my Spanish homework to read your story at 10 pm! It was totally better than homework!

nice fanfic, i loved the ending and the way u write it... :P

i liked it. it was kinda weird at first, for me, and with the whole Sesshoumaru cheating thing...gods, i wanted to shoot the bastard. but then i realised that he only did it 'cause he loved her. it was great, unpredictable and interesting, i like that. i just kept reading to see what would happen next, and that is the honest to God truth...

yea. *sniff* that was great, i always like these two chracters especially. great feeling, absolutely loved how it seemed to flow so well. especially the character building. liked it lots. ur a mastermind yui.

Great writing! Wonderful stories. had me encaptivated for hours. :)