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| moriah93ohio 2008-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it. It was good. Great one-shot! |
| ananserena 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseaww it wasn't that bad, don't be too ** yourself. i actually kinda liked that, it's different. |
| Micuko 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abusewow, awesome, love it *_* |
| Demon-Panda 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abusea review for you! yayness. I liked it. very...what's the word? not deep but emotional. oh! passionate. lol. keep it up. |
| lovelydepth 2004-06-15 ch 1, | abusethat was amazing! i love how you describe the passion and hate between harry and draco! wicked fic! keep it up! !Cardboardboxkid! |
| Jessica 2003-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh my god...your a great writer!^_^ that was verry good...aside from the mistakes! lol but keep writeing and ill keep reading! -Jessica |
| baasheep 2003-02-21 ch 1, | abuselove the story and the concept. I have great admiration for your translating the story into English (i can only speak one other language-fractured at the best of times). There were, as you pointed out, quite a few grammar mistakes although i don't think there were any spelling mistakes which is impressive. Some of the sentences didn't make sense when translated. I'd suggest getting a beta reader. That way, you can see the way English is constructed and hopefully get it right next time. Good job. luv baasheep xx |
| SaturnsFirefly (too lazy to... 2003-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe writing was very, very good. ^.^ There were just a few periods in the wrong places, but otherwise it was very well written. And I loved it. Very nice job. |
| SaturnsFirefly (too lazy to... 2003-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe writing was very, very good. ^.^ There were just a few periods in the wrong places, but otherwise it was very well written. And I loved it. Very nice job. |
| Trenay 2003-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice Fic! It's also pretty cool that you translated it, I probably sound dumb saying that, but the only language I know is English. Oh well, keep write'n! |
| Kumo-Kiyaku 2003-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwsome little fic you got here. Muy muy bien. Me gusta mucho ja ja ja. I didn't pay to much attention to the gramatical errors, so i didn't see any really. For your first englis fic you did awsome. Keep up the awsome work. I hope to see more. Do you have any fics in spanish by any chance around here? I'd like to take a try at reading them. |