Aw, I loved this story! It was so humorous and romantic at the same time! Hoshi and Malcolm forever! Great work! Keep it going!

not a bad twist on the original

Great story. I really like your using Feezal as the universal temptress. I agree that if she had had the chance she probably would have gone after Malcolm. I also like the confident Hoshi, especially telling Feezal to lay off.

Oh, and thanks for the head's up on the MHE yahoo group. I have just signed up, and am waiting for confirmation by TPTB.