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Liath Shadow
2009-06-24 . chapter 3
I love all of your stories, and was hoping that you'd work on this one some more, and mirrors multiplied as well. ^^ keep up the good work, and any mishaps coming to akane IS good for the most part :D
werdnakcep
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
I have ben a fan of 98% of your work sence 92,3? I had most saved on disk but had an acsedent and lost them if ther still around could you post where they got me through my fathers death so ther speshel to me
HitokiriHERO
2009-06-03 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really bad. I didn't even take the first word in and already, I am overwhelmed about the size of the paragraphs. I was hoping for a good story, but the massive chunks of text makes it hard for anyone to really enjoy.
Shining Ducky
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
I would have read this if it was readable.

Make new paragraphs when the subject changes, for dramatic effect, or when a person speaks.
asdfasdfasdfasdf
2008-06-22 . chapter 3
This is a really good fanfic so please update. I am a bit curious as to why Nabiki and Kasumi had the sudden change of heart.
Eden
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
This actually looks like it could be good, but it needs to be seperated into paragraphs with a blank line inbetween so it's actually readable.
rankokunalpha1
2008-01-29 . chapter 3
oh please finish or continue to write this story i loved it the first time i read it! keepup the awesome writing!
brindani
2007-02-24 . chapter 3
I've actually read this story three or four times. It is very interesting way of developing everybody in a Ranmaverse fashion. I'm deeply saddened that it hasn't continued. You've mentioned others have attempted to continue this great piece of work, but when I try to find them I have been unsuccessful. Do you happen to have any links?

Keep up the great work,

brindani
Redwood Rhiadra
2007-01-21 . chapter 3
If you're back, Skysaber, I'd like to vote for you to continue this fic - it's been one of my favorites since I started reading fanfic a couple of years ago.
Blackdex
2006-07-22 . chapter 3
Uh, Okay.
mikebreslau
2005-03-19 . chapter 3
One of my favorites, by one of my favorite authors.
Hadn't seen Chapter three before - nice ending.
Well done.
Ace A
2005-01-25 . chapter 3
VERY enjoyable fic, indeed. Its just a pity it was never continued.

Well, what's there is pure gold.
Jetflash
2004-12-29 . chapter 3
Is there any chance of this being updated? because if there is, please do.
Lone Templar
2004-12-08 . chapter 3
Another wonderful story. I really, truly hope that your muse starts working overtime on this one. I can't wait to see the mess that Gos and Akane can possibly make while 'fiddling' with magic. Keep up the good work.
dogbertcarroll
2003-08-16 . chapter 3
"Shoo." Kasumi waved her skirts at the creature
Only Kasumi could expect that to work. *grin*

Everybody looked on in wonderment at Kasumi's change.
I think she's got a thing for intelligent mature men
and Ranma has just proven he is one.

I like the fact that you have Cologne following him
around taking notes. It just seems fitting somehow.

LOL. I like the Demon versus Akane angle. It's funny
as hell.

Did Ryoga just go to free Loki?

Hehehe. Gosenkugi with a love spell to miscast at
Akane. I wonder how that will react to the various
spells she's trying to cast?

It took the combined alchemists of three royal academies
several years to complete a working formula. Just like
science magic will be used to cure Baldness and
impotency before all else! *grin*
It will bring more gold into the coffers then a lead
into gold spell would!

I like the work you did on Astrild. It really cements
everything together.

I completely forgot abought Kaori. When are you bringing
her in? If she was on the honeymoon how is she reacting to
finding herself alone in Europe? At least she'll know the
number to call home. Only those there when the spell was
cast seem to have the original set of memories.

"Mousse's cheering just increased in volume"
Hehehe. Mousse no longer chasing Shampoo just
desperately trying to escape engagement to Akane.

I hope you have another chapter ready!!
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