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escape5
2009-10-28 . chapter 13
truely an intense story there has to be more and soon. your fan
Cyera
2009-05-27 . chapter 13
good story!
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magialuna
2009-04-14 . chapter 13
This story is so good! I just found it tonight on someone's favorite lost. Are you going to write more or is it done?

I really enjoyed it so far. I'd love to read more. -Clare
FlittterKat
2009-01-13 . chapter 13
Dang, this was a good story. Oh well, I'll just have to imagine my own happy ending, lol. Great plot and execution. Loved the story.
2lazy2login
2007-12-26 . chapter 3
I don't understand why they cant just apparate out of the castle and to the ministry, order headquaters or something. wot about Lupin, and Tonks and all the other order members who would not have been at the school at the time? feeling your story has no foundation as to what's going on though I like your style, it just needs to be more thought through.
Andrea
2007-06-04 . chapter 7
This is my favourite story.I love it!
This song reminds me of this story...


"My sacrifice"

Hello my friend we meet again
Its been a while where should we begin...feels like forever
Within my heart are memories of perfect love that you gave to me
Oh, I remember

Chorus:
When you are with me
I feel...Im careless...i believe
Above all the others well fly
This brings tears to my eyes
My sacrifice

Weve seen our share of ups and downs
Oh, how quickly life can turn around...in an instant
It feels so good to reunite within yourself and within you mind
Lets find peace there

~chorus~

(I just want to settle again)
I just want to settle again

When you are with me
I feel...Im careless...i believe
Above all the others well fly
This brings tears to my eyes

~chorus~

My sacrifise

(I just want to settle again)
I just want to settle again

My sacrifise
bassgoddess
2005-09-21 . chapter 13
I just found this story...love it, love it, love it! Please go on!

Adding you to my faves!
latinachikita
2005-09-11 . chapter 13
WOW, this was an incrediable story!! Yeah finally they work things out, and I'm glad Draco isn't evil in this story! I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!

Sarah
ganainm
2005-08-05 . chapter 13
Nice fic. Thanks!
Black's Daughter
2005-07-07 . chapter 13
love the story! brillant ending!!
citten
2005-04-20 . chapter 13
Great, not as much as the other chapters but great non the less. I know it has been a long time so your tooth is got to be ok by now but i hope all went well. if this is the end i will want to hurt you so PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!
Miss Manda
2005-01-17 . chapter 1
I really do hope that this wasnt the last chapter because I want one more please.
zafaran
2004-10-23 . chapter 13
Oh, this story is *nice*. You do very good work, my dear, and I'm looking forward to reading the remaining chapters of this when you get them finished. Zafaran
A Perfect Lie
2004-08-22 . chapter 13
Aw this is so nice. Very surprising, I would have never though that they were in a spell. And then having him push her away and all that, well it kept me attached to my laptop. Very nicely done, I can't wait for an update! (But I will :P)
faerietalegoddess
2004-08-01 . chapter 13
What a GREAT story!...I'm wondering if Chapter 13 was the last? If so, I think you should do a nice little epilogue or something. *me and tying up loose ends* :-) Love the story!
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