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Reviews For: Shame

Malfoy Twin
2003-07-13
ch 2, anon.
abusethis is a really cool story you reviewed me so Iam returning the favour my secomd chapter is up
jen
2003-03-30
ch 10, anon.
abusereally good i cant wait 2 read more
fatallyyoursx
2003-03-03
ch 9,
abuseWEird! Angel is Angela's father?!?! FReaKY!! This is good! Continue!
jack
2003-03-03
ch 9, anon.
abusei loved this chapter i can't wait to read more
evie
2003-02-27
ch 7, anon.
abuseoh i can't wait for the next installment I really like this one.
fatallyyoursx
2003-02-24
ch 6,
abuseThat was good! Did Elizabeth really do it? Will Angela keep her promise? Keep writing!
SwTbabe522
2003-02-18
ch 4,
abuseKeep up the good work.
fatallyyoursx
2003-02-18
ch 4,
abuseI thought that was a very good chapter. It was very interesting. I just want to say you must, i mean MUST, keep writing!
SwTbabe522
2003-02-11
ch 1,
abuseGood start. Write more. Can't wait to hear about this vampires.
kiyoos
2003-02-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseInteresting. I am looking forward to knowing what is going to happen in the story.
I hope you make the chapters a little longer than the first though. :)
kiyoos
2003-02-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseInteresting. I am looking forward to knowing what is going to happen in the story.
I hope you make the chapters a little longer than the first though. :)
Imzadi
2003-02-10
ch 1,
abuseAn intriguing beginning. I'm anxious to read more. One small thing: each change of speaker calls for a new paragraph.

The woman smiled. "My name is Elizabeth. Lady Elizabeth to you and all your vampire friends."

The vampire nodded emphatically. "Lady Elizabeth.
Right. What do you want?"
Depressed one
2003-02-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's a great intro! but you didn't precise which season of Ats the story take place? 1,2,3 or4?
Tariq
2003-02-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseHi. PLZ CONTINUE!!! No A/C plz!!!
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