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Northgalus2002
2009-01-29 . chapter 8
I read this story a long time ago, but re-reading it was so funny! Having seen various AATC episodes where Alvin and/or his brothers have to dress up as girls, I just had to check out this fic.

You really nailed the 'munks personalities with this fic. Alvin's crazy schemes, Simon's acerbic wit, Theo's good-natured innocence, etc. While you can write dark fics with the best of them (i.e. The Chipmunk Saga), you can do light-hearted fics very well also.

I can't blame Brit for being ticked off at Alvie winning, Brit doesn't like coming in second with anything eh? I liked the part in the second chapter where Alvie tries to get Eleanor or Jean to enter the contest, particularly the allusion to the AATC eppie "My Fair Chipette", where Alvie puts Jean into a kiddie beauty contest.

This was like, too cute!

(Simon is readying the Tooth Fairy harness)
Simon: Are you ready, Alvin?
Alvin (behind tree): I love Theodore, but this is humiliating!
Simon: It can't be that bad.
(Alvin emerges from behind tree in a frilly tutu and a blond wig, Simon collapes in helpless laughter)
Alvin: I'm glad to see someone's enjoying this! - Chip Off The Old Tooth
ABSJFan
2009-01-29 . chapter 8
LOL Luv this story!
Reminds me of something my cousin did LOL.
DiceRox09
2009-01-29 . chapter 8
Lmfao xD
Omg..
this was ... SUCH a great story!
I remember it lol x]
I loved this OH soo much xD
The whole thing with Simon and Alvin and them having to "work together" so closely made me laugh xD
I can't believe it didn't make anything akward for any of them xD Lmao x]
You so have to write something like this again xD
I would LOVE to read it.
And this was such a cute, funny story xD
Please write again soon :]
MoonDay
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
Amusing story. I liked the fact that Alvin won.
Bugleader
2005-09-03 . chapter 1
I really surprised with you, You usually write serious stories, maybe a little dark fanfics, but this is funny, good and happy like a sun day. Great Work.
tibby
2003-11-26 . chapter 1
hehehe... thats hilarious
Anon
2003-05-30 . chapter 1
Thats a great story. All the characters stayed true and the plot was so typically Alvin. One of the only few I've read without sappy romance. You should write another, it was great!
Caluma
2003-04-26 . chapter 1
Hilarious.Absouletely hilarious.I almost busted a gut I was laughing so hard.I'm glad that you're not one of those people who ask if they spelled something wrong every other sentence.
martha warren
2003-03-15 . chapter 1
I think you should do a sequel to this story . And this story is very funny .If you like the Chipmunks and the Chipettes .
LenniluvsBrian
2003-02-13 . chapter 1
ROFLMAO! Good story. Cool 2! *laughs harder* Oh, Alvin; what will u do next? Adios!
KTBSPA & KTNTPA!
~Lenni~
Ayelet Ripley
2003-02-11 . chapter 1
Hehehe this was soooo cute! ^_^ I loved the line "Theodore ended up in a round little ball"!! That was just so cute! *hugs the little chubby chipmunk*
And the whole story is so good! *claps*
AiredaleLady
2003-02-10 . chapter 1
Omg, that was so funny. I LMAO all the way through. It was sorta like that Kabuki episode where they had to dress like women. Anyway, I loved this story--I had never read anything that put AS&T in a situation like that, although I could definately picture Alvin coming up with such a scheme. BTW, his voice already sounds feminine, he didn't have much more to do.
Anyway, please continue to write I reqally liked it.
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