 sabrina-diamond 2007-07-07 . chapter 17Wow! That battle was awesome! Ashura rocks when he turns bad. Can I please be in your fanfic?
Name: Pyren Tira
Element: (Dual) Fire/Psychic
Pokemon: 'Shadow' Ninetails and Kadabra
Personality: Feisty, humourous and kind... Mysterious at times, and yet awkward when it comes to battling.
Side: Neutral.
Past: Unknown |
 poka 2007-07-05 . chapter 8just thought u should know, the original version, it's an Ash X Misty (pokeshipping) story and may isn't in it |
 tanith-4486 2007-01-10 . chapter 15interesting... |
 unit 666 2006-12-25 . chapter 14 Mind Telling me why there's so many advanceshipping fics. |
 The Loliconvict 2006-10-15 . chapter 1Cool! |
 L' Fleur Noir 2006-09-07 . chapter 5Aw... It's not an AAML?. Why?!. You break my heart!! T.T
And, yes, I read that story (pkmn master from Ace Sanchez, is a best AAML! and a great fic ^^). Sorry, I Think your fic is an aaml, too -goomen u.u-
Forgive my awful english (sorry, but my original language is the spanish)
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 L' Fleur Noir 2006-09-06 . chapter 4Up date soon! ^^
AAML please! |
 Russa 2004-02-11 . chapter 13Hi again! Gee, I only have time to read one more chapter into this tonight. Aw Nuts! (hits self on head. Ow!) Uh, anyway, this just keeps getting better, as usual. Did I mention that you're a very good and descriptive writer? This is just brill! Well, I guess I'll be back to read some more later. I can't wait! (smiles) Cya then! ^_^ |
 Russa 2004-01-09 . chapter 12Hi! It's me again. Well, for a serious sounding story, you sure know how to mix humour into it. I always say it's good to have at least a bit of humour in a story to lighten a mood. Besides, it's fun. Anyway, Ash and May rolling on the ground like that was really cute. And the two chapters of Ash's Dya of Torture, had some parts that were absolutely hilarious! Again, I guess I'll read some more later. Oh, and did I mention, that you're now on my favourite authors list. Well, Ciao! ^_^ |
 Russa 2004-01-08 . chapter 9Hi again! Wow! Ash went and fought Sabrina on his own. It's a good thing that May was there to snap him out of that trance that Sabrina put him in. That was freaky. For a second there I really thought that he was going to kill her, don't know why though. Must have been your excellant discriptive writing. Anyway, the one at the second tower was good too. Good thing Ash had his friends and Pikachu there. And the battle with Agatha (if you want to call it that) was good too. If she won't die from the sword strike, the loss of blood surely will. By the way, did I mention that you're good with doing cliffhangers? You really are. Well, I guess I'll read some more of this later. I can't wait! Cya then! ^_^ |
 Russa 2004-01-03 . chapter 7Hi again! Wow! This story just keeps getting better and better. Oh yeah, sorry about getting Ash and Kiall mixed up in my head a few reviews ago. Anyway, I'm continuing to like this story. You're very good at mixing adventure, romance, and a bit of humour together. But now that Ash has a bunch of girl Masters (friends) by his side as well as Pikachu, I wonder how this is going effect his destiny in stopping Kiall. Considering all this romance you have in your stories. But you now Ash and May acting they 'hate' each other. Why? They make such a cute couple. So, Elizabeth is the Light Mistress, huh? Cool. Well, I suppose I'll read more later. Cya then! |
 Russa 2004-01-02 . chapter 4Hi! See? I told you I'd be back soon. Though I didn't know until I decided shortly that be back this soon. Anyway, this chapter's great too. Ash was mad about finding his old friend Brock dead. Hmm, how'd I know? So, now Ash has to fulfill the prophecy and keep all the gates from Gates from opening. 'Cause the Master of Shadow right? But who in the world is the Mistress of Light? I guess I'll find out later, when I read more. Cya then! ^_^ |
 Russa 2004-01-02 . chapter 3HI! Russa here again. I've read a few more chapters and I just keeps getting better. I guess. It's really amazing how fast Ash recovered from what happened. Though, now he has to control the power that he has. Man, that's not going to be easy. Of course nothing hardly ever is. I guess you don't like Brock to much huh? If you decided to do some bashing on him so early in the story that is. But I have a feeling we won't be seeing him again anytime soon. And what Kiall? Gosh, is he a freak or what? Yeah, and plain evil too. I'm off to read some more. Cya soon! ^_^ |
 Russa 2003-12-12 . chapter 1Hi! Russa here. I sure like your story "Shadow League" so far. Which is the sequel to "The Master of the World" right? Cool. Anyway, it's good even though I've only read the first chapter of it. So, everything that happened in the pervious one to Ash was becauase of the Shadow Master, Kiall. Freaky! I wonder what Ash (and May) are going to do. Especially Ash. I can't wait to continue with the story. But I'll do that later. Cya then! ^_^ |
 ShadowSnake27 2003-11-10 . chapter 24I like the story! The battle parts were awesome! I wonder whats going to happen in the sequil?
SEE YA LATER!
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