Reviews for The Adventures of Lana Inwards, Sorceress Supreme

Reviews For: The Adventures of Lana Inwards, Sorceress Supreme

Karris 2003-12-28 ch 6,	abuseGah! I must apologize for such a long interval between reviews. I'll have to keep better track of your work. Thank you, Ilione, for several more delightful chapters to read. Your clever and humorous writing style continues to add much entertainment to the story on top of what can be gleamed from your enchanting plot. Lana Inwards is excellent. As the spawn of Lina and Xellos, she should be the most mischevious being to ever grace the planet. I feel that you certainly capture this well. You have a knack for creating original characters. As for the plot itself, it is becoming more deep and engrossing with every passing chapter. The Mazoku (Lupin) seemed interested in Lana only for her raw potential power. If Lana began to master the abilities granted by her heritage, what would be the Mazoku response? Could a young girl stand up against such a mighty nemesis? Add to this the many, many questions of what happened in the past that remain, and there's quite a story shaping up here. The key will be to answer these lingering questions while keeping Lana and Eruk's adventure moving forward into exciting new avenues. Please continue!
RurouniGochan 2003-09-04 ch 6,	abusekicks at the ground and blushes, rubbing the back of her neck self-consciously Gawrsh, you actually like my stuff. Thanks! What a pleasure it is to here someone I admire enjoys something I may write. What a compliment! Ah, two more refreshing chapters! ^_^ Hmm, and this character Lupin sounds very interesting indeed! He seems to be working for/with the mazoku, but does this make him a bad guy or not? How cool! I love him already! Oh, and by the way Lupin, saying that you hope never to see them again is the best way to insure that you do. And probably sooner than you'd like (especially comparing it to your hopeful "never"). ...Yay! More Lupin! ^_^ Still curious as to what Lana's note said. Also what some of those "toys" were... Ah ha! And Xellos arrives on the scene! Huzzah! Hmm, Lana's teacher, eh? That role fits the namagomi's michevious and egnamic character perfectly. I wonder what he will further contribute to our rag-tag heroes. Even more, I wonder what he has planned... But that's probably a secret, right? ^^; As are Lana's mysterious powers. ...For now at least. Man, I can't wait to hear about the stories behind all of this! As always, please continue this story, Ilione! A wonderful look at the next generation that leaves the readers aching with curiosity! I'M aching! See, see? aches Proof that you must continue! ^^ Good luck! (Oh, and I noticed how you've been keeping a consistency with English terms; like "techer" instead of "sensei". I'm glad you do! It works well!)
Pogo 2003-07-23 ch 4,	abusethe way I interpret this story, it's that Eruk is G/S kid and Lana is X/L, but I might be wrong -.- keep writing.
Ysengrinn 2003-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell... I don't, but I think that Sylphiel's surname, Rada, is a polish word meaning 'happy' or 'joyfull'. And I'm afraid Coopa in my language stand for... **^^. Really, no offence. As for the story - not bad
RurouniGochan 2003-05-06 ch 4,	abuseYAY! This was continued! Whoo hoo! ^__^ Okay, as you can tell, I was looking forward to more of this one. It's just so well-written and already has such intrigue due to us not knowing for sure the origin of some of these kids. Hmm, blue haired man, eh? O! Exciting! I definitely wanna learn more about him! Wow, more of Lana and Eruk's traits and talents are coming out, making them even more interesting. laughs Glad Eruk can cook! Maybe Lana won't mind being around him as much anymore. But we haven't seen Eruk eat yet, have we? What kind of appetite does he have? Hmm, large wolf? Could be a hint at what will later become the main plot! Coolness! Please, PLEASE continue this! I love it!
Dragonet of flame 2003-05-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseHmm, I sense Xel/Lina, and Gourry/Syphiel. Specifically, I sense their kids. Sounds good to me. For once, the kids aren't trying to live up to thir parents or anything. I like that idea. Keep this up, and it'll be a good story. Longer chapters would be good though. Is the blue haired guy Martina and Zangulus' Kid, or Zelgadis'. You seem to like alt couples, so Zelgadis and who? You can be sure I'll keep reading to find out.
Hemp Chick 2003-05-01 ch 4,	abuseOkay, I agree with the people that say Lana is Lina and Xelloss's kid and Eruk is Gourry and Sylphiel's. I'm not quite sure about the blue haired man, though I have a hunch that it's Zelgadis. Please continue soon!
Sarie 2003-04-27 ch 4, anon.	abuseUsually, I'm oblivious to such hints. grins This story is getting really interesting. I hope that you do update soon. So, is Lana's parents Lina and Valgaav? (Come on, you can tell us .^__^.) As for this stranger, I kinda like a bad guy who later turns good, such as Zel or several other anime characters. He could be a hard core assassin or theif at the tender age of 15. . .I don't know. Whatever. There's only one person who can decide the outcome but they need to update HINT ~Latz~
RurouniGochan 2003-02-21 ch 2,	abuseLol! What a way to switch the roles or "Protector." A creative twist indeed! Goodness, with such a pairing, the possibilities are endless--especially when you take into account their supposed backgrounds. Aw come on, Eruk has to at least be Sylphiel's son. The Flare Arrow/Carrot proved it. Who else could make such a pathetic attempt at such a elementry spell? (Er, and I mean this all affectionately, of course.) Gosh, but if their parents really are who we suppose them to be, what exactly happened to our favorite Slayers troop? But I guess that should wait for a while. More current character development first, ne? Can't wait to see what adventures these two go on! Even better yet, who might they meet along the way? I'll be staying tuned in! Continue!
Eishirou 2003-02-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseAlso, Eruk is Sylphiel's Father's name. Further Evidence.
Karris 2003-02-19 ch 2,	abuseGreat story! I had a fun time reading this one. The Lana first-person perspective is very enjoyable to me, as is your writing style itself. On to the first A/N! I really like Lana and Eruk. I also find myself agreeing with your first two reviewers on their probable origins. If this is true, then it opens up so many interesting possibilities! (Who is Lana's 'teacher'? What happened to the rest of the Slayers cast?) As for creative input, Eruk's good will could drag them out on some sidequest, or Lana's profit motive might stir up trouble. Maybe the Mazoku will take an interest in Lana because of her heritage? (Xellos had to have broken some rules if he paired with Lina, right?) "That's a secret" I guess, eh? I'm excited about the potential of this story, hope to read more soon!
Cooking Spray 2003-02-17 ch 1,	abuse. I'm confused. Could someone please explain what I just read? Nice for a slightly Inversed-Slayers fic, I guess, pun intended and all. Bye-bye!
ZoieLark 2003-02-12 ch 1,	abuseI like the First Person POV, and the way your Lana character acts is a lot like Lina...and the name inWARDS has a piece of Zel in it...but her eyes and teleportation comes from mazoku blood. Green eyes and Blonde hair/tactless..er..ness sounds like Syphiel and Gourry. Anywho, it's probably a lot of speculation on my part...Hurry and continue. Maybe in the next town there's no food/food tastes funky and no one can eat it...
RurouniGochan 2003-02-11 ch 1,	abuseYay, another story by you! I actually like this intro. Kinda like how Gourry and Lina first met but different enough to stand on its own feet. And written with your clever style as always. ^_^ Hmm, who are they? Well, I'm going to go out on a limb and assume that this might be down the line in the "next generation" type thing. In which case, judging by descriptions of Lana and Eruk... Sounds like Lana is the child of Lina and Xellos (hair, eyes, build, power) while Eruk would be Gourry and Sylphiel's kid (hair, eyes, beauty, healer). Er, but that's a guess. Hmm, wonder how it might've come around to that though... Well, in any case, I'd like to see this continued! Hmm, as for adventures they could have... Well, one small scales you could always have the usual; treasure hunts, maybe a contest of sorts (hmm, but would they join forces or end up on opposite sides?), getting mixed up with bad (but rich) employees, etc. On a larger scale... You know, we never did meet Dynast or Deep Sea Dolphin... (the other Mazoku lords) Continue, please! ^_^

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