*Singing* I've got faith of the heart. I'm goin' where my heart will take me. I've got faith to believe, I can do anything... *stops singing as people shriek and cover their ears* Hehe, sorry Great fic! Update soon!

This story is really good so far. I'm a fan of Dan and Bess stories! It has real potential and I hope you'll update it really soon! :)

Yes, it does need proofreading, but I enjoyed it pretty much. The descriptions are more interesting and poetic than many fan fictions I have read. I hope you write more soon!

ooh oh you are goign to continue right its so good i can 't wait to see what happens next!

please update soon cuz i think this could be a good story. As long as you put Nick and Jo in it I promise to read more!

very interesting I hope you make more soon!

I loved it...please write more soon...also does Dan go back for Bess...does he fight for her love...does he save her from some guy...I want to know! incase you couldnt tell I love stories with Dan and Bess

Great job. It definitely needs some proof-reading (numerous spelling mistakes, etc.) But still good! Update soon.

Sierra.