XD! I really liked this. The whole.. Schu cutting himself seemed a little off character to me, but I like how you worked with it reguardless. Brad, however, was perfect. There were parts of your writing that didn't flow wonderfully, but they were easy to over look. Keep writing, you're fantastic.

Hey I liked this. You know it kind of reminds me of my Crawford and Schu fic but it was much better than mine (duh). OK with your story it showed Schuldig was the one suffering whilst mine had Crawford as the one feeling sad (it was OOC but it was an inspiration from his image song and not many people can picture Crawford as being sad ^_^;;). I think Crawford does care for Schuldig (c'est l'amour ^^;;), not because he's the leader and that was why he wanted the telepath to stop uh slicing himself up. Great one shot story BTW.

It's me, Pyrochan *bounces up and down*. You know that your fics are always good. I can read nearly everyhing you write ^^.

Nice B+S piece. ^^ keep up the good work!

or you could have gone with the i-think-you're-the-sexiest-piece-of-**-on-the-planet-so-i'm-going-to-screw-you-silly-and-then-torture-makoto-with-dreams-of-us-and-yohji-and-aya-freaking-each-other-like-mad ending. that woulda been good too XD i liked it, but whenever brad was talking i kept hearing schu mocking him... e_e hee hee

Midway I started worrying that this will end in Crawford allowing Schuldig to leave without talking to him with both angsting. I really do not like those types of fics and there are so many with this pairing that it really has turned me off from CxS fics. But I read this one since I am bored at work. I was not disappointed. I only have one complaint. It was too short!!!

I enjoyed it nonetheless. Both turned out very IC in my opinion. I believe under that confident facade of Schuldig's there's a young man in pain with no way out. And you wrote him so well. Aah, I hope you write more fics with this couple! Great job!