Dude! this poem was just great! i loved it! _ Seriously, this poem works perfect for the game! Good job!

Beutiful

I like it. It fits Hotsuma well _

I was expecting it to be angstier, but it was still good. Way better then some of the crap they try to pass off as fanfiction here. Keep it up.

This was...sob...angst-y. I really liked it. My dear husband Hotsuma liked it too. Isn't that right?

Hotsuma- sobbing uncontrollably

-_- I will take that as a yes. I liked this for two reasons:

1. It has Shinobi

2. You write poety better than me (everyone does)

Really, my rhymes suck.

Hotsuma- EVERYTHING you write sucks...

Beats him with a Wok

Hotsuma- X_X

Kep writing...OR YOU WILL SUFFER THE SAME FATE AS HE! waves bent wok at Hotsuma

aw how sad! this is great!

Strangely...it fits Hotsuma too perfectly.

He cares too much about his brother tha the fate of his clan

Amazing :) I loved it!