This was pretty good and I enjoyed reading it but I don't know why you have it listed under Simon/Mal, shouldn't it be labeled under Simon/River?

Another well written story, rich with emotion. Sad emotion but emotion all the same :)

Aw, that was very sad, but very well done. Well written. :)

Red Bess Rackham

What more can I say? Another perfect - perfect - and insightful snapshot of a character and beautifully written as always.

um wow that was amazing

Damn! If that picture on your profile is anything how you actually look then.err.oh, right. Umm.yes! Excellent story! I think I watched Firefly twice before it was cancelled but it was a good show. And your a great author and professional webchick.

amazing, your story totally blew me away. a great story about a couple of my favorite characters.

Wow. I have no idea what to say, I'm bad at reviewing. This was beautiful. I love Simon and River. This was amazing. Good job, keep up the great work.