 Angeldustedthatfreak 2006-07-19 . chapter 20EEK!!((Runs away)) How could you?!. . .
Think I'm gonna throw up. . . |
 blue-elf3001 2005-06-01 . chapter 20 this was very very very very good! It must have been because i read it all in one go, usually i never do that! Well done, i really enjoyed this! |
 Young Lady Nightcrawler 2005-02-20 . chapter 20Oh, wow. This story is just plain *awesome*. You killed off two of my least favorite characters; Jean and Rogue. If only you could have inculded Storm in the process...
J/K. XD You know, you made me wish just for a moment there that I was Rogue, even though she got flayed...I would do *anything* to get a kiss from Mortie. Hehe. Yesh, I am a bit insane, but that is part of my nature. Is there a sequel to this? There'd better be. If not, one had better show up soon. This is one of the few well written stories where the Brotherhood actually succeeds. It's a pity they couldn't do this in the movie... Anyways, you should write more stories like this. You're an excellent author, and I usually think of something to advise on, but I honestly can't for this one. Really. I can't criticize this in any way. Excellent work. Get a sequel up soon, girlie!
-YLN |
 Xany Kaos 2003-12-11 . chapter 1This was really great! Heartbreaking, too. Poor Mortie. I like the kinda of "Gollum" thing you've got goin' on. Real gruesome ending. The last line gave me shivers! |
 Noah Trydak 2003-08-20 . chapter 20! ... let me just take this moment to say: I love you. Will you do me the honor of becoming my wife?
(j/k). ! This was amazing! Wonderful and horrible and beautiful. Congrats, you've made my day.
-Noah |
 Baby-Cellophane 2003-07-23 . chapter 20i shiver with the spookiness...
this was wicked good. |
 Toads-Minion 2003-07-17 . chapter 20..That was good..but i'm still sad..so now not only is Rogue dead,so is mortimer..I'm sadder then I thought I would be... |
 Shitaka 2003-07-14 . chapter 20FINALLY! Someone that knows how to end a fic. Don't get me wrong i love Rogue, but Toad is so awesome and the bad guys have to win once in a while (not like all the x-men are dead) I loved it, oh man u HAVE 2 write a sequal.
Superb Job!
-Shitaka |
 OMightyWifeofShinigami 2003-07-13 . chapter 20Yes! All right Toad! This is one fantastic piece of work, I love Toad, he was my fave BoM in the movie... well besides Mystique. But I cannot belive the ending, it's fantastic, I'm tired of the everyone lives happily ever after. Superb, I tell ppl about your fic all the time and try and get them to read it. Everyone was so in-chara and Oh! Fantastic! I have no other words to desribe my feelings, I'm utterly speechless and thats a good thing. Oh man... that one great story. |
 Guin 2003-07-13 . chapter 20NO! Mort! NO! AHH! Mort's gone! And Rogue! Ahh!Final chater! AHH! |
 Sachedey 2003-07-13 . chapter 20How terrible...Dark and sadistic. I like it. |
 Sachedey 2003-07-10 . chapter 19Oh no! Don't do it! Write more now! |
 Guin 2003-06-26 . chapter 19Oh! Gasp! More please. This is really good , so whatever you do, keep writing! |
 Noah (the lazy bum) Trydak 2003-06-25 . chapter 19 Don't do it Toady! Don't do it! |
 Shitaka 2003-06-25 . chapter 19ok im not one to rush but...u best be gettin the next chapter up soon! =) =) =) hurry plz
-Shitaka |