Awwww

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Excellent. So very well done. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. :)

YES

MAGNIFICENT

It's amazing how easily you changed the outcome of the true story to create this masterpiece. I didn't suspect such differences...though I knew Snape's survival was AU, the other deaths and damages left me floored.

Sweet in some parts and heartache-y in others, this is a wonderful one-shot. And the characterization...EXACT.

The only thing I'd suggest adding is a scene-divider. Maybe just a series of hyphens or tildes to create a visible segue from scene to scene. Sometimes it's difficult to notice when a time lapse occurs.

Still, I utterly adore this story.

*smiles*

wonderful story!

I do like war hero stories. Lovely, melancholy story.

Hardly traditional, but still very good. XD

es buena aunque creo que le falto me dejo muchos huecos al final, saludos y animo.

Great story!

Lovely, I can't wait for more from you.

Like destructive ripples of magma.. slithering and settling into coolness, is one of the images I get when I ponder this story. Nicely written, I like how the ending is somewhat open to interpretation of the naughty bits ;)

Wow, this story is intense!

I just couldn't stop reading your fic.

Great work, I hope to read more from you!

This was beautiful. Heart rending and agonising in ways. But undeniably beautiful. Your words make me feel things that I normally only do when I am directly connected to them in reality. You have a power and a masterful way with words that I greatly admire. Thank you.

Mia

Oh wow, this is awesome. Though I'm sure you've heard this comment before, but separation lines would be nice. Overall, great work. I love it. :D

Fun fun fun. I really liked this. Very IC, well at least as much as a SS/HG can be!