Fun fun fun. I really liked this. Very IC, well at least as much as a SS/HG can be!

Wow, I really liked this. Thank you for sharing your good writting. I'm actually thinking about reading "The Buried Life" =)

Hmm! This was a really great story. I loved the plot and I loved how it ended. Um... the only problem was that your space markers weren't there. It was a little hard to follow until I got used to the time passages. Great job, though! Evil html!

This is realy good. I love how she has her own way to cope with everything. This is awesome.

this was beautiful. sniff. you handle grief extremely well.

I know this has been here for a LONG time, but I'm still glad I found it. Amazing!

Oh how I enjoyed this little story, well written and good storyline. Great job!

Very effective writing,. I cried through the first half of this. It's a very serious but hopeful story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.

Great story.

First, let me say this story was wonderful. I've been reading HP fanfic off and on for the past six years or so now, and I can't believe I had not stumbled on to one of your stories before. (However, I just finished reading this, the last one as I have now read all four you have posted.)

I do have one constructive criticism, and this might be more of a formatting problem with 's newer structure . . . I did feel a little confused for a few seconds in some spots (actually, thinking about it, in all four stories) when the POV or timing changed. (This story it was the timing.) I don't know if you originally had some kind of separation when you first posted it or not that might have helped.

That's the only one though. I loved the plot line immensely. I could see Severus and Hermione like this, totally. Although there is a part of me that would like to have gone further and heard Hermione's story, I suppose that would just mean me applauding your talent because it left me thirsting for more. And sincerely hoping that one day, you will write another fic.

I also wanted to let you know I just added you to my favorite author's list. :-)

this was really wonderful.

Wow. I am in awe. Reading that, it felt like there was not a word out of place; it flowed from first to last. I so rarely get to enjoy that graceful feeling when one floats through a story, unhindered by minor grammatial flaws that too often subtarct from the message. Thank you.

Aw, I know this story has been on the shelf for a while, and has become by force of Rowling AU, but I just wanted to say that I adore it! *hugs* Jen.

sad, sorta, cute, sorta, interesting, definately... good work

You should be showered in adulation - and you have been, if the number of reviews are an accurate representation. Your portrayals of Snape and Hermione are right on target, with interesting, believable details on the side. Very nice.