 dyingsoul 36 2008-03-07 . chapter 6... im not happy.
This was a good fic. I liked the new terminator and tom was a well nice guy but i hated that he died. I hate unhappy endings.
I don't think the resistance would have been that cruel. Maria is connors daughter, she, and he, should have realised that there was more to tom then a killing machine.
I liked it,but i feel you rushed it to a quick ending.
Sniff... damn depressing ending. |
 KageOkami-Kogo 2007-10-27 . chapter 6Although I would have liked the ending to be a bit more cheery it was phenomenal! Incredible! I loved it!! You deserve a lot more reviews for this master piece :D I thought of writing a story kinda like this... but all my ideas tend to be a bit exaggerating (is that even a word??) lol anywho, please write a sequel! |
 Ceries 2005-01-25 . chapter 6 this was... inspired. i hope that you might be able to continue this, as Thomas is one very intriging and original charector. oh, and if we see him at the front of the ship screaming anything about being the king of the world, ill shoot him myself. :) |
 Patapata 2004-10-24 . chapter 6 True: Writer can do what he wants with his characters.
Also true: reader can refuse to read...
'nuff said. |
 syrai 2004-09-14 . chapter 5I just don't understand how people bother to complain bout the ending. Honestly. Author writes what he or she wants and no one should have any complains on that. ANYWAY.
I loved that. I absolutely loved it - different and dark, unlike most of the stories I've read. Then again, I've never been into fluffy stuff where everything always ends up the way readers want them to. What's the point in that? I'm moving on! I am! So - I loved the ending too because it was something you didn't quite expect, or I didn't anyway. The first chapter really captured you and you couldn't stop reading so from my point of you ten outta ten stars. Excellent piece of writing. |
 Crest 2004-03-21 . chapter 5 Was overjoyed to find you finished the story... scanned the last two chapters - glad I didn't actually READ them. Depressed enough, here - don't want to add to this condition by reading depressing crap.
Still - thanks for doing FOUR great chapters... |
 Anonymousandnameless 2004-03-17 . chapter 6Woah, that was unexpected. Pretty depressing, actually, but still it was cool idea and well done. |
 ShadowHeart 2004-02-20 . chapter 6You said you wanted to dodge convention and you did. Good job. I try to do the same thing but I don't always do a great job. I can see why several readers would be disappointed, but I don't think it detracts from the fact that this is a great story. Even so, I find the simple, sappy reader in me wanting a continuation, and some sort of denoument for Thomas, instead of simply lying deactivated on a bench somewhere. Even so, it's a very creative story. |
 ShadowHeart 2004-02-20 . chapter 1Okay, this is my first Terminator fic, and I definitely enjoy it. Your first chapter describes your main character very well and I like your bit on the history of the Terminator. On another note, I took a peek at your review list and saw that one pesky flame-freak. I just want to say that I've had that happen to me and not to let it get to you. You're obviously smarter than he is anyway. Anyway, I'm on to the next chapter. |
 cyankupo 2004-02-18 . chapter 6This story is fascinating, because it shows a naive outsider's view of humanity. The main character seemed to think that he would be accepted by the humans, even if they knew what he was. I think your ending has something to say about humanity and the human distrust of the unknown. I just have one question...why didn't T-E1 resist as the humans 'dissected' him? |
 Cavana 2004-02-11 . chapter 1 Good. I was surprised by the abrupt ending, although that wasn't bad IMO. As far as any insights into the fic, I agree with Tug AND Koyoko Mei. |
 Matt Mathay 2004-02-10 . chapter 1 The story had a disappointing ending. Thomas should of had a chance to prove that he was an invaulable asset. Think about it, he was the one person in side Skynet's command center, which would be a intelligence coup for the Resistance. make a sequel or something. Besides my problem with the outcome, it was and is a good story. |
 Caleb Nova 2004-02-09 . chapter 6To: No longer a fan-
I don't have to make the point that humans are assholes, you seem to be doing a fine job on your own. What did you expect me to do, lie down when you ranted on about how much my ending sucked? I've notice that most authors either ignore flame reviews or get all discouraged that someone didn't like their story. I'm not most authors. I don't give a fuck whether or not you're a fan anymore. All I care about is that little number included with my story that tells everyone how many people bothered to read it. So thanks, you've made it look like there's more interest.
'Lame assed homo erectus neanderthalic sample of feces'? How very easy it is for you to write flames with a dictionary to reference, although with 'homo erectus' I don't know what the hell kind of dictionary you're using. As far as I can tell, that would mean that I walk erect. Such a keen observation. I find it interesting that I am a 'lardass', something you have apparently deduced with nothing more than my writing style as evidence. Unfortunately, I'm short about a hundred pounds. You lose again.
I also apparently have 'viral RNA for a brain', RNA of course being Ribonucleic Acid, a single-stranded nucleic acid made up of nucleotides. RNA is used to transcribe genetic information from DNA. Which means that any insult that would make any kind of sense would run along the lines of my brain being formed by viral RNA. You state that my brain consists of viral RNA. This is nonsensical, so much so that we come to the inescapable conclusion that your brain is formed of excrement.
I also noticed that you conviently 'forgot' to leave an email address. This clearly must have been an oversight, since an outgoing person like yourself would never think of not giving us the opportunity to continue this conversation via email if you so wished. Since I don't want to clog the review section any further, and would eventually run out of chapters anyway, feel free to email me. No, feel obliged to email me. I look forward to it. |
 Jee Simovia 2004-02-07 . chapter 6Superior. Now to discuss your next work... |
 Kenpo-Boy 2004-02-05 . chapter 6Awsomely awsome. My only complaint is that it ended so soon. I would have loved to see this story last several times as long. Of course though, quality over quantity. Rah. Great stuff, man; teh bawm dot cawm. |