Aw! So sweet!

Oh, this was wonderful fluffy fic. I always wondered how Bingley propsed to Jane. This was written very well. So sweet!

Interesting. Keep going.

Loved this! Beautiful use of language and so romantic. Really nicely done.

i loved it! i am so glad to be able to read that scene, because i always hated that it wasn't in the book or in any of the movies. good job and plz write more stories!

That was very smoothly written, very well done! I could imagine it being in the book or in the movie easily! Cool beans! Ciao!

Great Writing! I was hoping someone would write Mr. Bingley's proposal. :)
~lily~

Very well written, good portrayal of feelings for a third person story. A good use of language, I wouldn’t be surprised if Austen had written this herself lol. I liked it a lot.

Very nice! I often wondered how that was accomplished. Excellent work!

~DM