can u please do more. this one of the best things i have ever read

I like this Ang, puts a different spin on it. :-)

I loved it a lot! It was a very nice way of putting how Snape feels toward Harry and I was intrigued. It left a sense of something I can't explain in the end and I liked it.

This is definatly one of my favorites. See, it's on my list. Is there going to be some sort of sequal to this? It's really good. Ta!

Well written. I's like to read some more of your work.

This is a very good story. That's a very interesting way of showing why Snape hates Harry."Because you aren't mine." Just a few punctuation errors, but other than that, very nice. Maybe you'd like to expand on this a little more?

That last line clinches it. Breathtaking in seven words. I usually want great stories to go on longer, but this is brilliant as it is. Wonderful job.