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Reviews for: The Fourteen
duo2nd
2007-02-15 . chapter 1
The story with the ultamate Survival Guide included. Nice job.
loonytunecrazy
2006-08-13 . chapter 1
Good Sequal to Mary I liked the fourteen they interesing characters I hope you plan to do an orgin story for them
acosta pèrez josè ramiro
2005-03-17 . chapter 1
If you ever make another UKE AWARDS story, remember to include Dakota as a nominee for Best Villain. She´s great!
rae
2003-05-01 . chapter 1
...wtf?
Jonathan R
2003-04-26 . chapter 14
Hi there. Jonathan R here. Like you, I'm a member of webcomicforums.com as well as fanfiction.net(another Dandy fan!) I just recently made that discovery, and that, in my opinion, is kewl.

Anyway, cool story. The bloopers were a riot!
T.J.
2003-04-21 . chapter 14
Here's a blooper for you from chap 11(I'm not using the full scene, just part of it):

"*Good*-" his voice cracked for a moment, as his inner self did. "-eve-good night."

[WARPUNWARPWARP]

[WA-]

The J.A.M. slips on the peel and spins in the air five times.

"CUT! I ought to try that take again!"

Hope you like the blooper

T.J. signing off
T.J.
2003-04-10 . chapter 14
Tiny Toons was one of my favorite cartoons, and I didn't know that The J.A.M. personally entered himself in these stories. The bloopers were very funny, and I enjoyed the story. I really needed to laugh today.
Dagre
2003-03-19 . chapter 14
Whoa. Took me forever to finish this. :-) Very amusing, though slightly confusing (whee! I made a rhyme! ^_^), especially with the whole Dakota-Elmyra thing there. Still, it all basically ties together in the end.

'Twas also *very* funny, especially the bloopers. ("And yes, I'm the dunce here now!!" Hee hee! :-D)

Ekhad? Shammonneh? Exactly what kind of transliteration were you using? ;-)

Anyways, very amusing, as was mentioned already. A nice little story for Valentine's Day, which was--{checks}--about a month ago. These stories are *really long*! ^_^ You are a wonderful writer. Hope to see more stories. ;-)
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