Well done I do say! I loved the imagery, and even yes, the pain you wrote into it so well.
Night Silver's Whisper

AW! *sniffle sniffle* I adore Thatz...
that was so sad! :( But really really well written!
I like the ending ^_^

Oh my gods. That was soo... Depressing! Poor little Thatz!

I don't really get it... But its good. I like it . I didn't get when this happenned, and where the door led to. It was cute. Poor Thatz. Anyway, I liked even if I didn't get

you should write more it was good!!

Good.

Oh, this was a really good one. Very interesting perspective on how Thatz became a thief. Very well-written. ^_^ Good job!

Very good. I like the deep thoughts and descriptions. Keep on writing; you've got talent.