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| Reviews for Little Brother |
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   Cruelest Sea 6/5/12 . chapter 1Beautiful and touching. |
| XKliber 2/12/12 . chapter 1 Very nicely done. You captured Morgaine's anquish over being separated from Arthur, and it's nice foreshadowing for what happens later between them. |
| Lore 3/20/05 . chapter 1 Wow, this is really nice. Your sentence structure is superb, and, for as short as it is, it's really heart-wrenching. Keep it up! Beautiful! Lore |
| tHe vOiCe WiThiN 2/24/05 . chapter 1 Hey! This is probably one of the sweetest pieces I have ever read! It is very enchanting and it has made me reflect a lot on my feelings toward my little brother. I admit that I fight with him A LOT, but your piece and the book "Mists of Avalon" have made me think more about how lonely life would be without him. In the book, they don't make a big deal of the parting scene, but from what you say, I guess the movie does. I hope to be able to watch it someday! You have done an awesome job pouring your true feelings into the piece. I think it is just wonderful that you have dedicated it to your brother. He is EXRTREMELY LUCKY to have a loving sister like you! If you have any questions or concerns or anything, email me. I'll be glad to talk to you! From reading your profile, I can see we have a lot in common! We should get to know each other. By the way I love your pen name! Good luck and keep up with the good writing! Vandana |
| lovetowrite390 10/10/04 . chapter 1 Sweet! Very good job! :) |
| queerquail 5/8/04 . chapter 1 How sweet!...One of the nicest 'drabbles' I've read! |
| snazy piranha 4/14/04 . chapter 1 hey! this was really sweet! i especially liked the dedication, that made the whole thing perfect. excellent, i hope you try writing another mists of avalon fic, i just wrote one and i hope you check it out! |
| Elraralia 1/21/04 . chapter 1 Wow you like Bend It Like Beckham and The Mists of Avalon? You're well on your way to becoming my new best friend lol. I'm reading the book The Mists of Avalon right now... good read. I loved the show. The kinky part in the middle was a little 0S, but all-in-all it's a great show. |
| Mithralas 10/21/03 . chapter 1 Aw That's so sweet. I loved it. I can relate, having a little brother of my own. Very touching. |
| JennyJade 7/15/03 . chapter 1 That was so sweet :) what a cute fic |
| AnyaAnanda 7/1/03 . chapter 1 that is really sweet, you really expressed feelings that Morgaine might have felt, good job! PS - i think i might take you up on your offer to profred stories, please check me out here and on fictionpress mt id number is 282792, thanks! |
| Shenzee 6/14/03 . chapter 1 That is soo sweet! that part in the movie makes me cry. have u read the book? It's by marion Zimmer Bradly! Very good! You would enjoy it. |
| asha 5/14/03 . chapter 1 How beautiful! |
| Kate84 4/28/03 . chapter 1 That was so well written! That scene is so sad. |
| Red Handed Jane 4/2/03 . chapter 1 Lovely, you write very well. |
