this troy is just so sweet with little ron and girls touching percy fondly so cute i can't wait for the rest (btw i don't get the hunter joke ah well)

Excellent story! I never considered that Percy and Oliver might be the only boys in their year. They are absolutely adorable and very in-character I think. I like your OCs too. They're very believable so far. I love Bran; he's so sweet taking Oliver and Percy under his wing. Can't wait for an update!

I agree with Miss Puar. Did you lose your beta-reader and the third and fourth chapters.

I love this fic! So cute. ^^ Percy and Oliver are so kawaii, it burns. xDD I like how you made them act younger, yet still in character and believeable. Nice job.

Missy is a very well characterized made-up in particular, I think. Nice job.

yes, *sigh* girls are weird, I much prefer my male friend's company...er...yeah, you wanted to know that. Anyways! HAHA*nervously*

I loved the chapter, very nicel written. I liked the fact that Percy tries to find a way out of it, and can't, it's all so sweet, lol. Even if I am a shipper, they're only in first year, so i won't expect any until fifth. LOL! Kidding. Though I am a shipper...

Well, I really liked the comments about the Quidditch game, and they must be some pals if Oliver'd actually MISS a game for Percy here. Well, that's friendship for ya.

Not too many grammatical errors, and the flow is still BEATIFIC. I like Sally, she's a unique character, and well written. Percy would have a breakdown if they got in trouble, lol. Which is funny, and yet not...heh...

well, can't wait for an update!

AW! I absolutely LOVE Ron!! He's such a cute little bro, lol. yes, we wait until he starts school, and we'll still be proud of minimal spelling errors and no backwards letters, lol. No really, I love the little bugger *ruffles ROn muse's hair*

Well, anyways, not as many errors in this one, which is good, the plot is flowing VERY nicely, and I love all the dialouge in this, it seems very authentic, and the thoughts Percy has, and Oliver's attitude is very in character, and believeable. Over all, a very nice job, on to the next chapter!

Aw... I love the last little descriptions of how they slept, I can see it very clearly in my mind, and it's...aw...

Well*cough* getting past the cute factor here, there were more grammatical errors in this chapter, but it wasn't terribly serious. The writing is consistently good, and the plot is flowing very nicely. I love the insert about David Bowie, and may remind the little girl that she is also a Witch, unless she was reffering to magical males specifically... Aw well, what's done is done, it was a nice touch anyway. Well, very nice chapter, on to the next!

*Sigh* Absolutely delightful! LOL. And that really is the word for it. The chapter was delightful to read, and actually, *gasp* believeable. Many people describe them being friends, but never the actual becoming friends, so this is quite amazinf really! LOL. The Marcus tention was very nicely done, and I hold with Percy in that respect: when in doubt, confuse 'um. Except, i don't think Percy would ever say "'um" unless he could avoid it. Hmm... Well, anyway. I loved it! No any really disasterous grammatical errors, and over all very well written, unlike this review, so... yeah... on to the next chapter!

Aw... TOO CUTE! You really don't see a lot of Oliver and Percy stories Pre-Potter. I LOVE how you put in the characters that appear later, and the letters from the twins and Ron. Oliver is so cute. *huggles Oliver plushie* Write more soon!

So cute...and I'm a guy...oh dear GOD! I AM NOT TURNING GAY NOW AM I?
^_^ Update!

Too cute for words. (discustingly so!)
Keep it up.
ME

AW!!
I love percy fics, and this looks like a good one! I can't wait for you to continue, it's GREAT! I don't usually run into the percy before potter angle, and i like the way you do it! Continue soon!
Savi

ooh keep it up! =) i like this. it's lovely

that was so good. i love it. please continue. it's really good. oliver is so cute.

This is an adorable fic! It is going to be Percy/Oliver down the road, right? Right? Absolutely lovely.

~Enchanted