nice story but sad... lots of regrets... liked it though... good job... great work...

I like it. It's short and sweet, and each chapter follows the other, while still holding their own anonimity. In other words, they are strong enough to stand on their own, but they go so sweet together.

Maybe you could do chapters on some of the other characters in the series. Like the Senshi and the Shittenou. Or perhaps the modern day girls with their perspective boyfriends. Imagine Rei and Yuuchiru. Or one of the other girls and their boyfriends. (sadly, their names escape me) Or even Naru and Umino. There are any number of possibilities.

sigh I just really don't know why Mamoru and Usagi love to torment themselves. Isn't it just obvious that they're both dying for each other?

that was just a heartbreaking ending! i was so sad that he died without telling her how he felt. but you definitely have talent and i hope you continue writing u/m fics. perhaps a few with happier endings as well?

great work!

hi! you have a nice story here! although its sad it really says a lot! you have a lot of potential! i don't see the reason why there aren't many people reviewing this fic of yours! sigh,... read and reaview my fics too! bye!

Can you make another fic like this only with a happier ending? Make Mamoru look for Usagi in England or something like that.

I love the fic but really, you're depressing me!