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aspiemom
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseLove all the VDO movie shout-outs!
Lactuca
2007-06-01
ch 1,
abuseGod this is good. It's beautifully good. Character insight, spot on voice, action... I love it. I wish I'd written it. I'm really very jealous!
Metisse
2007-02-27
ch 1,
abuseWow,this was wonderful! I just happened upon it and thought it was well done. :-)
Marion the Geek
2007-01-30
ch 1,
abuseThis is an absolutely fantastic piece of writing. I particularly wanted to compliment my favorit piece of prose: "Eccentric he may be, but unperceptive he's definitely not. There's an ego in there somewhere, getting a squeeze off it all."
Great story. Very in character.
Kismet23
2006-12-31
ch 1,
abuseI can't believe I've never reviewed this one before, but it's one of my favorites. The police work is realistic, their relationship is beautifully "fleshed" out (sorry for the bad pun, I couldn't help myself), and I've read it several times and like it more each time.

Excellent story.
Scripted Starlet
2006-09-07
ch 1,
abuseSo good. I especially loved how Alex stood up and said what's what to that perp even after being slugged that many times. Great chemistry between Goren and Eames. (Not that they need any help but still, this lil' series of unfortunate events captured it really well.)
Beck
2006-05-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love all of your CI fic's, i wish i could have seen the ending to this one but never mind its still really great
elfluvr
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseLOVE this story!! Great reflections by each on the other. Now I have to go read all your other stories.
runawaynun
2005-12-03
ch 1,
abuseYes, three years later, I must say that I love this story. It captures the partners of Goren and Eames so well!
TrinityWildcat
2005-11-18
ch 1,
abuseWow. A truly excellent and convincing fic.
DharmaSutra
2005-07-23
ch 1,
abuseWell I just finished reading this and all I can say is: THANK YOU! When someone writes with the obvious insight and talent you are blessed with, it reinforces the truth that fanfic at its best is an art.
Ishie
2004-12-29
ch 1,
abuseJesus. Just, wow. I'm totally blown away by this. (And a little upset that this absolutely magnificent piece is the first bit of CI fic I've read. You've totally spoiled me now!) I love how you get inside Bobby's head: the split of attention, the slide into character, the constant analysis of surroundings, people and self. Eames? She's a tougher nut to crack (is that even possible??) but I like your take on her.

Favorite part: the one hit, two hit blow-by-blow. Just genius. So immediate and stream-of-consciousness and gah. Wonderful stuff.
Alamo Girl
2004-11-16
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE this fic! I read it a while back, and am reading it again, for a pick-me-up so I can continue on my CI fic. This is SO well written! Wonderful characterizations and great plot line. I'm all about Protective Bobby, and I love your insight into Eames' thoughts about him. Fantastic work! Have a drink on me!
Angelfirenze
2004-11-04
ch 1,
abuseOhmigsnark! I'm supposed to be EATING LUNCH! But no! You pulled me into this and now I only have forty-five minutes until my next class. Thank you! Okay, righteous ** over, this was AMAZING! I loved the way Alex remembered all the ways Bobby unconciously tries his best to make people comfortable. I loved this. I didn't appreciate Gary slapping Alex around, but the upside was Bobby putting his size thirteen foot as far up that bastard's ** as it would go. Squee. Protective!Bobby is Het!LOVE.
smeg1
2003-12-31
ch 1,
abuseThis really deserves a rave review, pity I'm knackered as its one in the morning, eh? Seriously, if at one in the morning I can dissern that this is exceptionally good, then it is better than excepetionally good! Well done, and thanks for not letting it spiral into a romance.
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