 Jane Black278 2009-07-22 . chapter 1very very funny! Goku, Piccolo and Vegeta together rocks! good job! (: |
 Darth Pooky 2005-12-09 . chapter 1HOW EMBARASSING! ROFL! |
 Afrodite 2005-05-22 . chapter 1HILARIOUS! Until the very end, when Videl reveals the identity of the "enemy" as a bottle of Midol, I had assumed they were trying to crack open a Tootsie Pop (the title reminded me of the "how many licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop" catch phrase).
In any case, that was a nice twist--it definitely explained why Vegeta and Goku were so concerned about defeating the enemy for their wives' sake!
Well-done! |
 Garowyn 2004-12-04 . chapter 1lol! Very good. |
 AnimeGirl622 2004-12-02 . chapter 1LOL! OMG! Another great story by you!! You are the greatest Dragonball Z author ever! Midol?! OMG! LOL!! *Wipes a tear from her eyes* Your story is absolutely priceless! |
 limelie 2004-05-01 . chapter 1i can't *sniff* stop *sniff* laughing! |
 POAS 2003-09-06 . chapter 1*uncontrolably laughing* Oh dear sweet KAMI! *wipes tears from eyes* That was funny. *PSHFT* *wipes spit from monitor*
POAS |
 almightyaphrodite 2003-08-22 . chapter 1cute! i loved it! please write more silly stories! |
 Bucky 2003-07-27 . chapter 1lol! Sawnya! Look at what a crack up you are!
You have a knack for these shocking twists at the end...hehe |
 Jade 2003-05-17 . chapter 1 HAHAHAH that's funny... I had suspicions it woulda been somethin like that... But I never thought I would be to open Midol. "Their happiness is our happiness." HAHAHA |
 Ryu 2003-02-20 . chapter 1LOL! This was hilarious!
I was wondering about the Midol thing, so I looked it up. "Is" it really that hard to open?
Oh, and to the other people who were wondering what Midol is, let me tell you; You don't want to know, especially the males.
~Ryu |
 Dreamwraith 2003-02-17 . chapter 1Except for the question of "What is Midol?", I found this quite funny. All that to open a bottle. Wow. |
 Rentol 2003-02-16 . chapter 1Well that was odd. |
 Megaman x1 2003-02-16 . chapter 1Great story, I mean it for sure. Some parts are pretty funny. Cya |
 Insane Kitten 2003-02-16 . chapter 1HAHAHAHA! Funny story! *Dies* Will there be a sequal? |