cool stuff... loved it... very very sporty..

Aww! This is sweet! A look into Max and Logan's future. This is just how it should be. I can go to sleep happy tonight. :)

I feel funny reviewing this since I did beta on it. But I gotta tell you that I enjoyed hte hell out of it. Max always wanted to be a normal girl and now she has realized that dream. Everything we wanted has come true in this story.

Thanks.

Karen.this is a great little fic. Cute but not too cute.
Hey Lelu! Where is this phantom "dig" you found!! I am the Almighty Beta! I miss nothing! Hee!

What a fun fic, Kasman! I really enjoyed reading this.I love seeing Logan apply his love for strategy to little league. *G* I bet Max is one of those loud parents in the stands when she goes to games, right? Thanks so much! It really put a smile on my face.

Kasman, I've this story 3 times and I love it each time I read it; very well done. I can't think of any critisms to make except I did find one dig you missed instead of inning. I want to see more of your writing.soon!

Can you imagine how much I loved this fic? This is exactly how I'd wish Max's and Logan's future to be.

What a wonderful idea.

Besides being a great glimpse into one of many possible M&L future situations, this fic even qualified for a crash course into the game I had formerly thought of as purely American. I know better now. ;-) Great job with the shippy moments.

Finding your great little story first thing this morning, well, it's morning where I am, was the best gift on a Monday.

I really liked the S1 feel to it even though it's far in the future. The best thing was NO Alec or other transgenics. The only ones I liked were the original X-5's. But that's just me.

I am so sick of Alec and disappointed that the VS-3 if full of him. If you don't know the virtual season 3, it's out there. But don't bother unless you really like Alec because he's all over it like maggots on a dead rat.

You are a good writer and I hope to see more of your stuff. I hope you write Max and Logan; that's the real Dark Angel to me.

Hey, great story. I really like Max and Logan together. It's interesting that there are only few stories about M/L living together. I don't know if writers think this isn't possible but you show us that is possible and funny. Congratulations.

Hey, thisis really great. I love how you explained the game, and the fact the Max and Logan finally hooked up and had kids.
~egbkid

That Australian sun sure is good for you, spend more time outside and write more fic.

Enjoyed the entire story, especially the last bit about the race and also your use of Bennett and Maryanne

This is so good! You have put a big smile on my face. I love seeing Logan and Max and their kids in the future, and this is certainly a story idea I haven't seen on ff.net before. It brought back so many Little League memories for me! Almost like being at the game myself.

One thing you might want to fix: Jonas, not Alex, should be the one running bases between Marcus and Ben.

I suspect the post-game ritual might be a regional difference.Little League teams in my area don't give three cheers. Instead, they line up and shake hands with the opposing players and coaches.

There's so much I love about this. It's a great story and I am going to bed quite happy. Thanks for writing it.

Kyre
(signing my name here in case the review function is still wonky)

Very nice story and nicely done.

There is something that makes it extra special and that is NO Alec. Even though it is many years in the future, it had a S One feel to it. I can't explain that, but it did.

Thank you for no Alec. I've become so sick of him. He is everywhere. In chat we call him the plague, which is so funny because we all used to love him. I never wanted him with Max, but I loved the character. I don't know if you are reading VS3, but that's why we call him the plague. He is all over VS3, like a fungus.

Anyway, please write more. I liked your series on S-1 in verse. That is damn good. Please ask your muse to come back.

Thanks for your good writing.

That was really sweet :) I loved it! You took M/L and put them in such a real-life believable context. It gives my heart a painful tug to know that it’ll never be like that on the show. Thank God for fan fiction and writers like you. I was a bit confused with Alex’s role, if he was also Max and Logan’s son, before you described Ben and Eva. But other than that, this story is written so well. Thanks for this wonderful treat. I hope there’s more ;)

Raydyan