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Reviews For: Rivalry

Kamitra
2003-07-30
ch 1,
abuseIs there more to this? It's got my curiosity going...
If I was any more obsessed with the series, I'd be threatening to strangle you. Just so you know. *innocent smile*
Paradoxical Goddess
2003-04-05
ch 1,
abuseHorrors. I just realized that the only things at fanfiction that you'll find of mine are utter crap from like freshmen year. *hides* Check me out at w.fictionpress.net (Since I can't write prose at all, I'm stuck on poetry.)

Anyway, this one is well-written but I think I should know who the characters are before I can really enjoy/understand it.
5201314
2003-02-16
ch 1,
abuse=) oh gosh, i only just read act 180 a couple of days ago, DYING to find out if Hikaru wins. =) But i'm glad he only lost by such a small measure. he will surely win Yonha, ne? =) Anyway, I think you have a great style. It flowed very well, didn't have to read a sentence twice. I loved how you portrayed Hikaru's feelings. =) Will there be a part two? or is this a one shot??

yours,
sakura
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