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| Shuutastic 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseShe pulled away, still crying. The edges of her lips pulled upwards, creating a very confusing expression. “If you don’t kiss me right now,” she informed him, “I’m going to clobber you.” Nice. Very nice. I liked this. It deviated from the clichés and it was an interesting read. Nice job. :) |
| Pokemon Goddess 2008-03-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa That was a preetay good storay! [giggle, laugh] luv it! |
| Katy Morrison 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was most romantic story ever!I love small things that become big!I knew that they would turn out something like that! P.S.-Pikachu could be used in so many ways in this fnfic please include him more then a "lazy slug" |
| Chaos-Paladin 2005-05-05 ch 1, | abuseWhat!? you? this? suck? hardly! this was awesome! no sappy i love you's, or to much sappyness. i loved it all. good job, i really liked it! Misty: "If you don't kiss me right now, I am going to clobber you." that was too hilarious! |
| A Different Life 2005-01-15 ch 1, | abuselove it! |
| GameGuardian2x 2004-12-15 ch 1, | abuseLovely. absolutely lovely. Woulda liked it even if it weren't a total sucker for AAML |
| daniellemonkey 2004-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved it! |
| TristanSkye 2004-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was really good.I loved it. |
| mystery 2004-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was a long story. |
| :) 2004-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood: 1.Brilliant writing 2.Cute and romantic 3.Convincing charecters Bad: 1.Unoriginal plot 2.Could use a bit more comedy or romance 6/10 |
| gurlhushere13 2004-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWOW! This is such a cute story!! Makes me feel all fuzzy and warm inside after reading it! Well keep up the good work! |
| Cat 2004-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it! that was the most realistic get together i've ever read! Can I borrow the paragraph describing Giovanni for 'my favorite quotes'? Ash with his hair combed and parted, [Homer Simpson drool]... |
| Dragoness 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseCute and sweet as sugar-coated...sugar. Only not. I mean..um.. If it was THAT sweet, I probably wouldn't have liked it as much, because that meant they wouldn't have been half as in-character, now would they? *^_^*; Marvelous.. *^_^*;; Now.. I'd say more, but tis late, and what can be said that hasn't been said already? In the fic I mean. Um.. Yeah. Oh, yes, this is why I'm ending the review now, before I continue and make a fool of myself. *nods* Um.. Tat's all! *^_^*; |
| ainominako 2004-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWHHE! Tuxedo Mask as Ash... Now that's an interesting concept. What if you had made Misty into SM? I would have died laughing! |
| Amber Myst 2003-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was so cute! |