I rarely say this, but this fic was absolutely brilliant. I love your writing style, and I really like the way you wrote Tezuka... The conversation at the end was really cute, you should be really proud of this fic!

Not at all OoC! He didn't ACT OoC, and one can only guess what so-quiet buchou is thinking. It was very well done!

Late comment, gomen. ^^;;

I really wanted to commend you on this story though. It was, for a lack of words, wonderful. I loved the way you described Tezuka's feelings of falling and how it shifted into a flying sensation. And I simply adored Fuji's short, and sweet interaction with the couple. It was so Fuji-like to allow them to relax and bring out the strength within them. Good job!

Ah, very good. I don't think the policys are that strict, but it made for a good story ne? And Tezuka was perfect, so don't worry about that...

ha ha ok i agree about the fact that they all look like theyre in high school or college or w/e lol anyways this is a good fic. its sad that middle schoolers cant date but its a good thing also because look at america lol we date at any age lol an where does that lead us? nowhere lol. anyways i think we can see these anime characters dating cuz of the fact they look like teenagers in high schol lol. keep up the good work ^_^

Oh, I'm surprised you were able to do so well with Tezuka and Fuji's characters after only 20 episodes! ^__^ And Echizen's nap. heehehee, I love napping Ryouma. =) This was a nice story, keep it up!

hm.. i dont get it T_T sorry im clueless..

O.o They really have that sort of rules? Damn. It's really too bad for those middle schoolers. ^^ But anyways every country differs from another so there's nothing we can do about it, but accept it. *shrugs* Tezuka isn't OoC. I'm pretty sure he's quite IC. Yes... it's a bit disturbing to agree with you on that. I've sort of a problem accepting him as 14. I guess boys grow quicker than girls around age 14+ Really. My cousin is actually as old as I am, but he's 2 heads taller than me when he's 14. O.o He's grown quite tall. I guess anime just have its advantages. Like G.T.O's 14 yeard olds. Anyways I love the description... the falling part is very interesting. Nice work!

I really enjoyed your story. You did a wonderful job keeping Tezuka and Fuji in character! I wasn't aware that Japan had such strict rules about dating in junior high school. And I agree that Tezuka in no way looks 14.

Wahaha... I can just imagine poor Tezuka, having to figure out what that plummeting feeling is.

No next chapter? This is one of the better PoT fanfics I've read for the Tezu/Fuji coupling. I certainly don't think you've written OC at all.

The only disappointment I've had is that the story ended so soon. Moto kaittekudasai!!

Y'know, even before you said that at the bottom, I was thinking that you'd done a really good job making everyone seem the right age. *nods* Great job, overall. ^^

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That was WONDERFUL!
Very IC if you ask me.
And SO sweet!
Keep up the good work! :D

^.^ i really like PoT fanfics. theres really not many of them at all.. =) you did a great job in writing it. out of all the fuji/tezu fics. yours was the least ooc ^.^ i hope you write more in the future. also about the age bit. i feel the same also ^.^ they look too old/ too hot to be 14 year olds. but oh wells ^.^ im not complaining *drools* lol ~dOrk

Very light, very sweet--I love this fic. (In-character Fuji and Tezuka at last--thank you so much! Enjoy the other 40-odd episodes--Tezuka really doesn't play very often . . . for certain reasons.)