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| That Other Guy 2006-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseYeah… I remember that time in my life quite clearly… I found my answers though, and every time I look around I have to smile, because everything makes sense… |
| Visitor-Ilvinaeda07 2003-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOnce again, the stories you write have that unusual sense of cryptic angst. I think if anything, this is the mildest of the 4 stories I've read so far. I do like the way you try to push certain aspects of each character, yet you almost always keep the characters "in-character." If anything, just keep writing. Try continuing some of your old fics...I like almost everything about your fics. Keep writing! |
| autophage 2003-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhere do you come up w/ these ideas dude? and when are ya' gonna do chapter 3 for "A place just for us?" At any rate, your artistic merit shine like gold once again Kalus, and this story is no exception with such original events and well-developed thoughts. In-character is your schtick for sure, I might add. Keep up your quality works! |
| Zoro50 2003-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was a pretty good work. I thought the beginning of the work was weak. It seemed disjointed. As the story progressed into the mental dialogues there was a definete improvement, and I was enjoying it by the end. You may want to look at revising some of the text in the first half. Mostly to clear up how you phrased things. |
| frograss 2003-02-17 ch 1, | abuseYeah, one reviewer said that they were OOC. True, a bit. But this is a fanfic. The dialogue is theoretical as are the characters responses to each other. I thought the work was insightful and very well done. I'm not certain if this fic will continue or if it's a one-shot, but I would like to see more. Good work. |
| Optimus Magnus 2003-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI am intrigued. Continue, please. |
| SoulFire4 2003-02-16 ch 1, | abuseVery well executed. My only complaint would be that Shinji and Rei seem a little out of character in what they say. I look forward to the rest. |