it seemed sad to me it left me longing for something

awesome this deserves more reviews

Very good!I love it!*is a rabid .Hack/sign fan*even though i've seen them all,i still watch the reruns of it!heheh...but wait a sec,whose the person in the cave with Tsukasa?

That was really good! Are you gonna continue this?

Good story! Tho, believe it or not, Maha (The cat) is a girl! I was confused too...so many wierd gender issues in that show...they need a girl who's actually a guy! xD

You have a good ear for angst. I could imagine you reading this out loud, checking it for rythym. Contine writing .hack stuff, god knows we need it... try your hand at Infection fanfics. MMn... Angsty Kite...

I LOVE this fic!
I've tried on several occasions to find .hack fics...
Obviously in the wrong places, hehe. I think this fic needs more to it though; like maybe a second chapter??
No pressure, I assure you.

I liked how you told a little about the cat charater, he's something of an enigma to me.

this is a really interesting fic. ^_^ sorry, thats about all i can say.

-l337 master

yes..ive actually created a name for meslef besides anonymous..but moving away frum my pointless comment ^_^ that was really good. one of the best(and few) hack fics ive read. if u decide to continue(which you should) make it even better(if thats possible!) you portrayed tsukasa really well, it felt like it was a real episode i was watching.

I've seen a grand total of ONE episode of .Hack//SIGN and I can't stand it. I don't know why I even read this, but you did a great job and kudos, for being one of the first to bother writing about it. Hope to read more, soon!

Well, this is the first .Hack//Sign fan fic that I have read. I like it a lot. You did a GREAT job at portarying Tsukasa's personality and actions. I just finnished watching the entire series (subbed only) yesterday!! It was awsome. Anyways, I am glad that the first fic I read was so good.

There was a strange sort of beauty in that, even though it was somewhat cut short. You can really feel Tsukasa's loneliness in the last few lines. Are you continuing this?

Serini: //claps// very very good! ^-^
Yami Serini: I like that story!