love the story...

This is the end? I really liked the story, especially the end. Write the sequel fast!

Is this the end of the story? Do you intend to have a sequel? If so, could you email me the title? My email is Severus_Snape_Hogwarts

What is wrong with you, the past 4 chapters are not even that. growls! Admittedly the story seems to be okay however your length of chapters is extremely poor. Read a book and youll understand what i mean.

i really liked ur story. itz alot better than what I can do. Why did u mke ur chappies so short?

anyways, it wuz really good, and I enjoyed reading it.

LONGER CHAPTERS! Do i have to spell it out for u? L-o-n-g-e-r C-h-a-p-t-e-r-s!

this is a really great story do u have anymore that you have written? if so please email me at thank you

this story was great! I love everything about it! I can't wait for the sequel.

Hey, I really like this story...but whats with the short chapters? It is really good, and I am not criticising...or at least not intentionally, but I was just wondering. I like really long ch. Thanks

It's really good!

*sob sob* so touching, i sobbed once, ok maybe twice when im readin this...hope ur seqeul is up soon!

Hi! I read this all in one go and it was great! Can you tell me when the sequel is up? I'd greatly appreciate it!

Eizoku

Another nice story... What can I say... Pity it ends here... And, sorry, did you start writing a sequel?

As for the small chapters, don't listen what evil people say. I love them. The gift is to say much in a small place!

Keep going! Excellent.

This was - whew. Where did Jane come from, and whatever did she do to further the plot? Also, I am sorry to say, very week characterizations and reasoning all around.