Poor Muk... but Muk are not the greatest Pokemon... and I bet it would be jealous of all the other Pokemon that get to go out and do stuff!

So sad. Poor thing!

And now I feel bad about... all my pokemon except for my party. Sob.

Awesome story! Lovee.

Kao

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Aw... I feel really bad for Muk. Muks need love too. I always did wonder how unused pokemon felt.

;.; So sad *sniff*

Another very interesting tale Phantomness. The story holds some great facts. Treat each of your pokemon with love and care. Not like what is described here. Fantastic job.

*raises eyebrow* ok, that was sort o angsty, really.

That was nice, though the ending was unexpected. I thought she was taking much out to train him, or something.

I assumed this story was based off your own games, right?

This was nicely done. The writing was good, and the story was easy to follow.

I hope you write more in the future

Wow! That was soo good and so sad! I can't believe you would do that to your poor Muk. Oh well at least you let it go free at the end. I loved it. :Sobbing: I loved it. It was so sweet!