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QuantaGamer 2006-03-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm not usually a fan for stuff like this, but this is one heck of a story! Good job on the storyline. It's the good writing I see that makes me think, "God, how do they do that?" Keep up the great work!
Puma Alisia Sanders 2005-03-19 ch 6, anon.	abuseOh my... Well, my spy's intuition tells me that Andrew likes Chamille, as does Wolf but he won't admit it. Chamille likes her brother but hey I like mine too. And this Caroline girl... I will have to do research on her. That's about it.
Puma Alisia Sanders 2005-03-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh... So that was the "complication" that Wolf told me about over the com. I guess McCloud isn't the only one with long lost relatives.
Chibialandra 2003-11-03 ch 6, anon.	abuseI was so glad when i saw this was updated, seeing as it takes u so long to get a chapter together for this, but no worries cuz this chapter was brilliant. it advanced the story along- this caroline person is interesting. clearly wolf was with her quite a few yrs before this story is taking place. and leon is going crazee. he he heh. anyhow, these ramblings of mine mean you've done a good job, u had me grinning a few times at the funny bits (couldn't laugh because there's a no speaking rule in the library) and intrigued at the intriguing bits. please update soon. ^.^
Kane3 2003-08-22 ch 5,	abuseGee Ashyun, any excuse to have Wolf marching around half naked, eh? :) Seriously though, you've got a good juxtaposition of a dark and mysertious fic about Leon combined some slapstick from Pigma and Andrew, along with, dare I say, a hint of romance? Good job.
doesntcareanymore 2003-08-22 ch 5,	abuseHey! Nice chappy ^^; As you know well this is one of my favorite stories and I can't wait to read more! I still can't figure out why Andrew is always getting hit with cold things. First a HUGE chunk of ice, and then a refridgerator door. What next a cold fish? (I hope so ~_^)
Del Rappy 2003-08-09 ch 5,	abuseI love the torture in this story. Keep writing!
Atrox M. 2003-08-08 ch 5,	abuseI already reviewed this chapter on the MSS, but I thought I'd put some good word on here. Excellent chapter Imagen, I really look forward to the rest of the story. I like how you portray Leon and Wolf, and Chamille is looking to be an interesting character. Keep up the good work.
Alankria 2003-08-07 ch 5,	abusei was kinda worried u'd keeled over and died, but luckily i had nothing to fear and you're continuing just as well.
Robert Monroe 2003-07-11 ch 1, anon.	abusemuaahahahaha theres IS no hiding imagen i found u on FF.net! MUAHAHAHAahem anyway ive said at MSS and ill say it here,GOOD DAMN STORY I MUST SEE UPDATES AH...sorry phsyco moment...btw im using a library comp OO;
sarah7777 2003-07-06 ch 4, anon.	abusegood story...review SOON!
doesntcareanymore 2003-06-14 ch 4,	abuseWow, great chapter! I just love the way you can turn words into an art, this is truly magestic. Lol, I'm such a sucker for touchy fics. That was so funny when Wolf threw the chunk of ice at Andrew, I could just see him posing with his arm flexed and then immediatly going back to work. Keep this up becuase this story is certainly going to go far. I think maybe if you had the story posted as a pg-13 rather than an R it might get more attention. But in any case, this is a story that every one should read, no, experience!
Crasher1 2003-05-29 ch 4,	abuseFinally! Great fic! Keep it up!
Chibialandra 2003-05-20 ch 4, anon.	abuseBack again... I just thought of an interesting twist for you story, although you can ignore me if u like. Basically, Fox gets captured by StarWolf... cuz Chamille strikes me as not going to jump to torture him like Leon and Wolf would, and considering the developments between Wolf and Chamille it would be interesting to see what she had to say to him. But it's just a thought. Go whichever way u like with this story, and I shall follow.
Alankria 2003-05-20 ch 4,	abusenice to see you're alive ^.^ and you wrote a good chapter. very interesting (and that's good not bad) I look forward to the next chapter, hopefully I won't have to wait so long.

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