This was a terrific story and I'm pleased I stumbled across it. I very much liked this Harry and this Severus. You did a grand job!

Cool and I enjoyed this. Thanks for writing.

Wow. I can't tell you how awesome this story is! It's really unique in its story line and the way you put all these twists in it. The chapters with little Harry were just so adorable! I coulnd't stop my smiling! And you're writing is wonderful, by the way.

I'm just going to go over to your profile to see if you have a sequel to this, and if not, any other stories!

This was so good. I love your stories. I didn't think I'd find one I liked better then Sunday, Bloody Sunday, but this one tops it. I would love to see some other years done in this world, but I know how time consuming writing can be. Anyway, excellent job, best Severitus I've read in a long time, probably ever.

This is a brilliant story - I love the way Harry and Snape act, and the way the story flows is fascinating XD

This is very good.

Excellent story! I loved how this was different since Harry did not know who he was until later on. I like the twists to the PS/SS storyline and how some things changed and some stayed the same. This was an excellent story and a sequel would be nice but I doubt that will happen since this was written so long ago. :)

Ahh, I love it!! Seeing Snape as a father just makes me so happy! He is definitely my favorite character, and I think you did a great job writing him. And I really loved the way you did Harry as a foreigner- he spoke in a different way than all the other kids, and it really made it a lot easier to picture him with an accent.
Well done! It was an excellent fic! And I must say that I am totally in to the whole Snape-as-a-father thing now.

I have never read a story which offers an alternative timeline to the books. Admittedly, I hate the death of Dumbledore and avoid all HBP compliant fics too, but I have never read any fic where Harry is removed from the Dursleys at a young age.

I don't think I ever deliberately will but I wanted you to know where this comment comes from. It comes from hating even the idea of messing with the foundations which made me a fan.

I really like this though.

This particular chapter really made me smile (a rare thing in fanfic now, with so many rotten little dunderheads getting effusive praise for diabolical literary-diahorrea) and I wanted you to know. I never thought that I would read further than the realisation that it was "one of those" within this genre, but I shall finish this one. What a wonderful moment, made all the better by the fact that it was building before the information was revealed (despite knowing it was coming). Making Minerva drag Dumbledore out was a pleasing move of scene preservation. Very good job.

Corrections;

Frank and ALice Longbottom

Bellatrix and Rudolfo Lestrange

Barty Crouch Junior did not escape Azkaban, his father broke him out with his dying Polyjuiced mother taking his place in the cell and being buried as him.

Did you read the books?

This was a very innovative take on the Snape-is-Harry's-father story. I thought you did a great job of weaving the plot of PS/SS through your plot. You made lots of changes so that the reader never knows exactly what's going to happen, but you kept with the basics of PS/SS. Plus, you're an excellent writer. Well done!

*there was a roaring sound in the back of his head, and it was suddenly hard to think. All he knew was that he wanted a sequel, and he wanted it very badly.* Great stuff, great stuff.

Very good. Very interestingly done.

Wouldn't Harry have had it easier than most when it came to spell pronunciation and comprehension? Because spells are mostly derived from Latin and Latin and Greek seem very close to me. Kyrios (sp?) for Lord in Greek and Kyrie for Lord in Latin (as in Kyrie Eleison- Lord Have Mercy)

I really liked this. I got the link off of FictionAlley, and it was really good. I liked how you made Harry different, but not annoying to read about. The differences in the plot were more than welcome, as well. I hate reading stories that are the same as the books. Very good job.

Ha! Great story. Quite unique amongst the other Harry & Snape stories. Well done.