okay, the fic is old, but i just read this weak. It was amazing, congratulation. I love B/S. Thank you

good but could be longer

The ending was a little unclear; a litte more detail there wouldn't hurt. The story was so good, though! I love the part when Brennan meets his child...that was so sweet, yet sad at the same time. Keep writing!

Molten Saffire

very nice story :)

That was a great story! Keep up the good work! No offense, but this is in regards to Crystal, who wrote a reply to this story. Crystal, if you can't tolerate the grammar mistakes, then don't read the story. I am not trying to intentionally "play" you, but I doubt the grammar and spelling errors were that much of a deal. By the way, I think you should take your own advice because in your review, you spelled grammar this way, "grammer", when in reality it is spelled this way, "grammar." Sorry to rant about that, I just had to correct her mistake in correcting the writer's mistakes. Again, great story, and I am sorry if anyone was offended by anything I said. Keep up the good work; I look forward to reading more.

Yay! Happy ending. Great story! :D write more soon.

Please watch your grammer and spelling. It's very annoying.

Good story, though.

keep up the good work!

AW POOR EMMA! keep up the good story writing! hehehehe at least I don't have to wait for the next chapter!

Chrislyn

o nice twist! Shal and Brennan need to HIDE Hailey! hehehehehe keep it up!

Chrislyn

Loved your story, cant wait for more

update soon, its really good!

this is really good. keep up with the action!

This is really good. I really want some more,quickly?

Great story so far. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next.