Fantastic! Had me going the entire time! Diddnt want to stop reading! Keep it up! 5 stars and two thumbs way way up!

A little childish, but very much in tone with the game. Well done.

Man, this is the best grandia story i have ever read. Very well written you must have put a lot of thought into this. I was sitting in class when i came upon your story, and couldn't wait to get home to finish it. To me the first grandia is the best game ever made, better than final fantasy seven. This story just expanded my imagination, that's why i like it so much.

Incredible! Simply Incredible! Dude, you are my new idol!

Nice fic! I'm a massive Grandia fan, and have finally gotten round to planning my own fic! I hope you will read it and review when I put it up! I'll ead yhe rest later!

Very spectacular.

Right a sequal to the sequal.

Yargh M eart'ys

This is one of the most intresting Grandia stories I've have read by far. The holy water scene was very funny, I was laughing out of my chair, along with the other humour bits, the Holy water though was my favorite. It had all the things you would kinda expect from a sequal. Great job!

...i dunno how're the other chaps are gonna look like but without Feena, how the heck are the guys supposed to kill Gaia?

Up till now, i'm rating the story 7 out of 10 coz i haven't finished reading it. ONWARDS! (reads next chap)

O.O;; Guido's more than 'awesome', Justin. He's FANTASTIC! (Heck, he probably bribed everyone into the army...)

The Holy water thing was really funny! _ Hadn't had a great laugh since a few weeks back!

Hm... honestly, Baal's a great pain in the neck! I hate him! I loathe him! I ABOHR HIM! And, yeah, really smart thinking, Rapp... you guys could've ran away ages ago...

Well, in this chap, i see that the three sergeants have suddenly disappeared.

The three sergeants are... weird... weirder than they were in the game. Mio's background story was nice, Nana's was scary and Saki's... well, it was a bit expected.

Say, my dream team in the game would be Justin, Feena, Rapp and Milda. Where're the other playable characters like Liete, Milda, Gadwin and Guido? (Guido didn't go missing again, did he?)

Heheheheh... Perfect! Now i shall TORTURE Nana to her death! With... BATS! (holds up a few cages full of the darned beasts)

...Hang on. Do manticores exist in the game? i must've forgotten how they looked like and... This fic is going to my fav. stories!

So far, i like this chapter best. The others, where i was trying, in a vain attempt to find some good inspiration and getting a good feel of Rapp's personality didn't work out to good.

But, the way you portray the three sergeants were really nice. Especially Mio. Always liked the gal but i hate her speeches...(In the game)

Just HOPEFULLY Rapp doesn't turn into more of an idiot than you already made him...

wow really great absoloutly fantastic. you should do one for grandia 2 and grandia xtreme as well. and if you already have its not my problem. really great story but if you remember the story actually ended when justin and feena arrived at parm with all these kids at the end of the credits but its still really cool to see what happened before then...(and to see how they got the children, yeah dont act like you dont like it ;)

GAHH! You MEANIE JUSTIN!
Rapp wouldn't let Feena die!