It's a good story and everything, it's just.. why hasn't anyone else mentioned that you spelt Relena wrong the entire time? x_x"

But I think you have captured the character's personas perfectly.. Heero might've been a bit off, but i mean. It's Heero Yuy. This guy is touch to crack.

Loved it, wonderfully well done and can't wait to see more.

you had me worried a minute i thought i'd have to pull a yuy on you a nd kill you

Wow. I LOVE this. It's so incredibly nice to read a fic where the author doesn't want to tear Relena into little bitty shreds. _ No. Really. I mean it. This is simply awesome. In fact, I think this rates up with one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Yep. *sigh* Now I have to add it onto my favorites list, even if YOU're already on it. Cheerio, and kudos!

This was good! You were never quite sure if Heero and Relena were going to get together. *grins* You did really well!

*blinks and stares blankly* That...was rather abrupt. Cute ending note, though. Pity it's not as easy as you make it. Okay, could I hope that there's a continuation of this? Preferably starting where she slaps him senseless for daring such a thing?

*rubs at her chest* Oi, still feelin' th' pain. Felt it last chap, too. *shakes her head* Amazing. *L* An' I never even noticed ya'd slipped on th' descriptions. It actually suited the story (at that point, at least) like that. Now, though, it was done well. Thought at the beginning it might be a bit much but lookin' back, it needed th' description. For this chap, at least. *VBG* So...when's Heero crashin' th' party cause I jus' KNOW he will. *LOL* Probably wring the neck of any guy who even LOOKS at her, too! *cackles again* Heero in a jealous rage is so sweet!

*laughs and shakes her head* Oi...I can SO see them gettin' into a brawl. Good wake-up-call chap. *nods* Oh, and I've found that the majority of the people seem to prefer the "Sanq" spelling and I tend to agree. Considering the area that it's in, it makes sense.

*stares in shock as she rubs at her chest, quite like Quatre always does* Damn...I actually FELT her pain. *blinks* That's never happened before. Not with a fic, anyways. *blinks then looks to Sable* That was a damn good chapter, short as it was. Might have went slightly overboard with Heero's ICness but understandable. *shakes her head* Damn...

*cackles gleefully* Zechs is so cute when he's playing the over-protective elder brother! Relena's reaction to Heero was cute, too, and Duo's encouraging Heero from the door was hilarious!

*laughs, even as she winces* Poot Quat an' Doro...and Heero! *shakes her head* Oi, a slightly cliched reason for him not going to her, but understandable for him nonetheless. *VBG* Can't wait to see how he handles th' blonde duo.

*L* Well, here's another warm fuzzy fer ya. An' yer friend's right. It DOES seem anti-yaoi. *shrugs* Might be me but I jus' can't see Tro an' Quat with ANYONE of th' opposite gender. Well, unless one or the other had a sex change and even then that's pushing it in my book. These two are practically what the term "yaoi" was MADE for. *blinks and comes out of rant mode* Errr...sorry about that. *shrugs* I'm not as fond about the couple as I am about others, but they're cute together. *makes a face* And puttin' Quat with Dorothy? Ew. No 'fense, but that's just wrong on SO many levels. *L* Like I can change anything with words now. This one's done finished. Can't wait to see how it ends, though, despite the small things in here that bug me (like the whole TroxQuat thing). Ya do them rather well.

Oi, this is shapin' up rather well. Reason I ain't reviewed fer th' prev two chaps was cause I found this at Star Crossed Love and jus' happened t' notice th' "r&r" at th' bottom o' chap 2 an' as far as I know, FF.N is th' only place that writer's ask ya t' read an' review. So I looked and found this. Much prefer FF.N's system. *nods* Easier, I think. *L* Was wonderin' when ya'd get Heero in, though.

i loved it. but i think you should write one more chapter to finish it off. maybe so duo can gloat over what what happened. please just one more chapter. keep writing.

I LOVE THIS!

Ahem: What I meant was...

I absolutely adore this.

Nywaz, have a great CHAPTER-WRITING filled day!