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xXSephirosXx
2009-02-12 . chapter 7
Hey this is a realy good story, but hasn't been updated in years! Please finish it for us, the readers!
NewYorkTendaberry
2006-07-24 . chapter 7
I like this fanfic.It's full of mystery and riddles although a tiny bit confusing.And I love the password DLEIAFTEH. A combination of life and death.Very clever.Can't wait 4 the next chapter.
Yo
2006-04-06 . chapter 1
you sick **, stop writing gay fics and do your homework... there's too many horny 13 year olds on this site.
Hikari Yume
2005-12-09 . chapter 2
LOL I loved the Cloud and Squall moment. ^_^
lilalou
2005-08-30 . chapter 7
For those of you who don't read "To love an ancient", the auhor had in fact written a new chapter of KH2, but it got deleted. I understand your pain Aer_Seph4eva. T_T
But by the quick descrition she made of it, oh my ! It'll be worth the wait ! [Lilalou makes a triple back flip in joy ]
Yusagi
2005-05-09 . chapter 8
eh?

NO Aer/Seph section? BAD GIRL!

Well, I know my brother died as soon as the battle began, the first time.

You should have heard his squeal when Seph's first attack anihillated him..lol XD
star
2005-01-13 . chapter 8
love it!! can't wait for the next chapter^_^
chibi oniyuri
2004-10-10 . chapter 8
I think I'm more confused than ever. Who are the Lord and Master? Why is it that Riku doesn't remember Sephiroth? Obviously, Sephiroth is the one originally from FF7, but how can there be two? Why does the Lord remind me of Sora? What do you mean, Riku won't die *yet*? And most importantly of all, where was the Aeriseph? I hardly call a brief snippet of them Aeriseph! And the worst part is, I can't continue because there aren't anymore chapters. So...um...*in a rush*please can you update soon?! I'd be very grateful!
chibi oniyuri
2004-10-10 . chapter 7
So the figures are like the future selves sent back to aid hemselves in the quest...Interesting...I'm kinsa sorta starting to understand where this is going. OK, maybe not that much, but I understand what's happened so far. OK, except for the beginning of the chapter. Who's the Master and the Lord? Who's the fighter with red hair and green eyes? Who's locked in the room? Oh, and I don't think figuring out the epitaph is that difficult...I mean, meteor, fire, cat-like eyes, sword piercing an abdomen...not too many clues would be more giveaways...unless, of course, I'm jumping to conclusions again. Onwards!
chibi oniyuri
2004-10-09 . chapter 6
So which was she? The hero or the coward? Her actions were heroic, as she tried to destroy Sephiroth. I guess that's a point that confuses me; do they love each other already, or are they just fulfilling their lust? Sephiroth's reaction to her kiss was what led me to ponder this, but I'm no closer to answering this than I was a few days ago. *sigh*

Poor Cloud. He has to keep watching Sephiroth take Aeris from him, though this time it was his own fault, poor soul.

Interesting myth. Even while reading the story, I decided Aeris was Life and Sephiroth was Death. Am I allowed to put my theories here? I hope so, 'cuz I'm going to...No I won't, that would ruin it for someone else.

Well, onwards!
chibi oniyuri
2004-10-09 . chapter 5
Awesome chapter! Riku gets to some unknown plane and talks to some unknown voice, Cloud finds out about Aeris and seems upset about it in a more-than-friendship way, Sora attempts suicide, decides against it, and gets attacked by Heartless, Donald and Goofy come to the rescue, and, best of all, Aeris gives in and lets Sephiroth give her what she desires most! Yes, lovely. I thought the voice talking to Riku was Sora, but I don't think Sora would refer to himself in third person. I don' think Aeris will hold on to her decision, she'll try to outsmart Sephy somehow.

I only saw a few problems, mostly with commas and pronouns. That's it though. Well, onwards!
chibi oniyuri
2004-10-09 . chapter 4
AAh! All this talk of clones and Unknowns and Darkness and Light is making me confused. I'm following it fine now, but I know it'll get worse in the future. Ahh...what an ultimatum given to Aeris..."Betray your friend or watch all you love die"...not very nice...and holding Masamune to her throat isn't very nice either, might I add. Ah well, what's written is written, and it does add to Sephiroth's character. What will she choose? I think I already know, but...
chibi oniyuri
2004-10-09 . chapter 3
Yay! Excellent chapter!

The last-minute saves are always so delightful to read. The scene with Mickey, Sephy, and Riku is just too darn hilarious, as is the Cloud/Leon scene. Well, on to the next one!
chibi oniyuri
2004-10-09 . chapter 2
Aw...poor Sora. I'd feel awful, having nothing but fantasies to live on for three years...I like the bit about Riku wearing the blindfold, because it makes sense.

One thing that utterly confused me was the change between first and second person within a sentence. If you want to switch every sentence, that's fine, but switching within the sentence confuses the reader. Or, at least, me.

I remember reading this, oh so long ago, when the last chapter was the cliffhanger on Aeris's decision. I remember how much I liked the story, so I decided to review each chapter as I reread. So, on to the next chapter!...tomorrow...I'm kinda sleepy now.
Travithian Axile
2004-09-14 . chapter 8
*gasps in awe* that was wonderful! Though that Seph/Jenova interaction was sick...ugh...No, I don't think the chapter was too long. On the contrary, it could be longer! Update soon, bye!
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