As I am an avid reader of Jean Grey - Phoenix..I found this rather moving and touching. Good job and keep it up.

Continue this story but next time from Jean's point of view.

You'll let me cry my life out again, won't you?

That was all too sweet! Yer ol' pal, The Bud.

Well done. Too many people disregard the complexity of Scott for the image. Actually many characters get caught in this trap, and you've done a great job of shattering that part of Cyclops open to show the hidden part below.

I'm a Wolvie fan and I absolutely hate Scott. Having said that this is one of the best stories from his point of view I've ever seen. ;)