 Sekisetsu Komoriuta 2009-04-04 . chapter 1Normally I don't like stories like this, but it was very very cute, kudos to you! |
 Death101- Fox Version 2008-10-18 . chapter 1Interesting. Awesome job!
-d101 |
 SpiritWell [Too lazy to log in] 2004-10-21 . chapter 1 Quote: "My eyes rose to meet his once again. No smile had been on his face, but a small one was seen on my own, one that was full of happiness and unbelieveability (so it isn't a word. shoot me.)"
Two words for you, my friend. Creative license. |
 Kandi7 2003-06-18 . chapter 1and I whispered to him, "You are my angel." And whoever it is sleeps it a sweet bliss knowing that they aren't alone. Aww. Ok I don't really know if that's any good but it's an idea right?? |
 SYF 2003-03-29 . chapter 1All I can say is...wow. It was sweet. Keep writing like this. |
 Thaliel 2003-03-24 . chapter 1Really nice. I know a lot of people (including myself ^.^) who would wish for something like this to really happen. |