LOVED the story. Absolutely ADORED it! =D Read it in less than 4 hrs! Woohho! Please, pretty please make a sequel! =D

Wow! This is an excellent piece of fanfiction you have here! Everything from the plot, to the way it was written, to the characters was phenomenally well done! There's so much to say it's like, where do I start? lol

First, you're dream world was so well constructed. I thought you did a really good job explaining it, from how it worked, to why humans weren't allowed to visit anymore. I also thought it was neat how you used some mythological figures as rulers of the world.

I loved how you worked original plot pieces from Ranma into your story. For example, the hentai horde stressing Akane out was what caused her to begin having funny dreams and led to Ranma meeting her. And how the nekoken training is what got Ranma into the dream world in the first place. Also it was interesting how you worked Ryu into the story. I didn't read the manga, just watched the anime and sadly a lot of characters didn't make it into the show and he was one of them. But I do know a little about him from the internet and stuff. I agree that it was rather fortunate that Ranma did turn out the way he did despite being raised by Genma as anyone else might not have fared as well (case in point: Ryu). His character was obnoxious and disgusting and since that's what you were going for you did well. I definitely didn't like him.

Another interesting aspect was what went down between the Tendo sisters, Soun, and Genma. Personally, I could never really see Soun doing that to his baby girls, but it was an interesting addition to your story. I did feel like that piece wasn't really wrapped up though. Genma and Ryu took off and then the girls kicked Soun out but where did he go? What did he do? What about Genma and Ryu? They just gonna keep traveling around forever now? Maybe Soun met up with them, I don't know. But I kind of would have liked to. I'm just one of those people that likes all the little details lol I also thought it was cool that Nodoka divorced Genma. I mean come on, the guy was a terrible husband and a terrible father end of story. Dump his ass! lol

I do think it would have been nice to see some more of the canon characters but I am happy we at least got to kind of see them at the end in the fight against Morpheus and such. I also thought it was cool how you worked Cologne's old age into things. Like how she was so old she remembered Zeke and when people were allowed into the dream world. She is really old lol I thought it was very interesting how you worked the Amazon's coming to Nerima for Ranma after all. It figures Cologne would thing to try and find the Ranma in the Blind for Shampoo. A part of me would like to see how that played out (and possibly others. Ukyo could say the engagement is back on now that Ranma isn't comatose-like anymore and Ryoga could come after him for forcing him into that weird dream thing since he knew it was someone else's fault lol), especially since you left it open like that. But then again, I got to see Ranma and Akane get together happily and that's the best part for me so I'm happy with where it ended :)

Once again, the whole thing was great, truly a Ranma fanfic masterpiece! Thanks for sharing and especially finishing such an awesome story! :)

i read all the chapters in one sitting and thought they were outstanding, keep up the great work, looking forward to reading more.

this was an interesting and engaging fic, beginning to end. much enjoyed.

intrigued.

*sighs with stars in eyes* how...utterly kawaii; I love this fic, it's getting a special place of honour in my favs, really it is :D with a few name changes you could publish this and make millions! ;) Keep up the good work!

last name: kumon

"Notice of Disclaimer: 'dis claimer here claims dat 'dis work of fiction is based on da' works of Rumiko Takahashi and no one here is claimin' day's ownin' it see?" now that's good old fashioned racism

I'm enjoying this story - it's well written, and completely original/different. Most of the entities are in-character and the logic seems quite plausible. Good work.

And now a note about "Ah! My Akane": AMG/Ranma crossovers of this kind are my favorite genre, and yours is one of the more promising ones - but woefully incomplete. I urge you to get back to it if possible, or give someone permission to extend it.

Regards,
Mike

This story was very cute and addictive. Too addictive. I have classes in the morning, you know, and I can't afford to sit up late reading about dreams like an errant preteen. :P Thanks for writing this. It was fun in all the right places.

"There must be some sort of laxative for writer's block out there. Of course writer's diarrhea would be messy."

That is at once a disgusting and intriguing thought. XD

"Dream, reality, what matters is we have ice cream."

One of the best lines in fanfiction history. :D True that.

SERVICING HIM?!?!?!?! OMG! I had to read that sentence like... .217398162798 times cos I just couldn't believe it... It was... shocking... but you redeemed yourself with the nightmare hahaha, Akane with babies and stuff... great fic!

Sugoi, I can't believe I just read all sixteen chapters of this story. @_@ It was just...addicting. Its like getting a new book and not being able to put it down. I figure it be a little wrong to just read and not review. Afterall, you deserve one. Especially for writing all this.

This...was pretty awesome. One of my favorite parts were when you actually gather some of the Ranma-gumi into the fanfiction. The bit with Ryouga and him knowing it was someone's else fault And such. That made me giggle.

>o; Geez I feel like I should write more, But reading sixteen chapters of something makes me lack creativity. I just really wanted to say you did a great job on this and I really enjoyed City of Dreams. That and Akane is a lucky-Lucky girl. xD Along with Ranma...except the girl part.

Hi. just finished reading this fic. heh, read it all in one setting. pretty good.

Not to sound insulting though but this is wayy better thatn return of the age of heroes. to be fair I'm not much for the multi cross over fic types.