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| fanta_faerie 2006-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethat went really deep... |
| Ardent Affair 2006-06-08 ch 1,  | abusethat was really great writing. is there more? are sere and dare gonna end up 2gether? |
| firegoddess372 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abusePlease update! I LOVE this fic. I LOVE you work in general. I'm dying here. You have to update. You rock! |
| stargirl 2005-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a sad and beautiful story! Absolutely flawless. |
| moonangel1 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseActually, I liked that you left things to the imagination. It allowed for more concentration on the emotional core of the story. Are you considering writing a sequel or epilogue? I love good stories but I'm a sucker for happy endings and the ending did set up for a potential happier follow up. |
| siren 2004-03-02 ch 1, | abuseyou're probably sick of hearing from me by now. But what can you do? I really like this story, although it left me sorta confused. Like, why did Darien try to kill her in the first place? |
| Davina Meaoru 2003-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI think theres much room for improvment like the fact theres only one chapter.You should really work on that.In other words great story.Sorry it took me so long to review. |
| loveology 2003-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved everything up to the gun scene. I mean, why exactly were they in that situation? And Darien hit Serena, didn't he? A bit OOC from the rest of the story. I mean he loves her, so wouldn't he always protect her instead of harming her? A bit confusing. |
| a.k.a ettie 2003-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI like ur fic. Wish there was a sequel. ^_^ |
| kumiko 2003-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abusedamn! you made me cry! how could you! lol! you write very well! but adding a little more about what happened next to darien would be better! just suggesting though! =) keep up the good work and email me for updates or just about anything you want! tata! |
| ladyluna529 2003-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story gave me the shivers, it is that well written. WOW! |
| Kon Gyousano 2003-03-08 ch 1, | abuseYeah! Another great story! I love the description! ~*Kon*~ |
| The flutterer; butter-fly 2003-03-04 ch 1, | abuseYou've brought out the emotion she was feeling very well which I think is most important when you are writing a first person view. Well I am a little lost..but I'm sure you'll clear all that up in the second chapter. So quick! |
| ......... 2003-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseMORE NOW! SO GOOD! |
| Darling Dancer 2003-02-27 ch 1, | abusewow. that was like. amazing. And YES YOU FOOLED ME! Gawd!! You scared me! No fair! I kinda got lost but otherwise I love it!:D |