Curse you! Like with most of your unfishied works, you have a nack of quiting in the most interesting parts of your stories. It's a most annoying trait...

Anyways, update this amazing story soon, V E R Y soon.

Beautifully written story. Vivian is well done, with more than enough history and characterization to make her a believable character. The incorporation of french into the story really builds on her history of being educated in a French school, and gives a lot of credibility to her claim of being of French descent. You are fast becoming one of my favorite authors on this site. Thank you for a wonderful read. Hope for more soon.

Wish you the best.

t'was a great fanfic...i do hope it continues though...I'm hanging here!! XD...i hope your muse gets more inspiration in continuing...and You ROCK!! :)

update soon

I just started (and finished) reading this story and I love it!! I haven't really been reading any fanfic since the last book came out but I was going through some old files of mine and your story came up. It sounded interesting so I decided to read it. It was not at all what I was expecting. From the summery I was thinking it would be some kind of time-travel, going back in time, undoing a mistake, and then returning to the presant and seeing what has changed. That I have seen done before, this I have not. In fact, I don't remember any story with Harry having an Older sister, always a younger one or a twin (mostly the latter). I really like it!!
I really wish you would update! I know that, as of right now, I have only been waiting 5 minutes, but still!
Please update!
Soon!!
: )

I just discovered your story. I have really enjoyed reading it. I don't usually like original characters but I like Vivian. It is nice that Harry has a family now who obviously cares for him. I was just wondering...why hasn't there been any interaction between Harry and Sirius and Remus? I hope you haven't lost interest in the story completely.

u r so awesome. i want that spell that forces me to speak in a diff language, i'd use it when i was away in the country that spoke the language then return when i could speak english again. loved to see umbridge getting done for, didn't Lee also under go the incidi plectri with Umbitch?
so everyone gradually realises that Vivian is Harry's sis, cool.
please write more, i need something to help me get through A levels.

Liz

the main reason OC's are not generally well recieved is because they generally come across as Mary Sue's, and unfortunatley your main OC is a Mary Sue

ThunderGod

Loved it! so can't wait for the next chapter.

excellant story. harry finally has a loving family and someone to watch out for him. please continue this story.

Brilliant. Absolutely Brilliant. Please continue it very soon.

well done, keep up the good work, and update.

Mary Sue = Vivian Potter? Everyone seems to like her thus far, but she needs a character flaw of some kind.

I really like this! Vivian is really believable and I can actually see her existing and being related to Harry. And I think you're really good at making JKR's characters believable. I can really see all of this happening! Please update as soon as you can!

It was cool till you created a supercharacter. Vivian being a general?