 xMysteriousxButxFriendlyx 2007-11-27 . chapter 5 Am... I hope you haven't died... And I hope Donovan has not too. But it seems that he was a little bit right saying that we will see you after few centuries... :(
Anyway, back to the main reason of this review.
The story is nice and I like how you have not changed the main story line with the 10th(And 11th) walker very much this far. The idea about another hobbit in the travel is really interesting. :)
I really would be happy if you would update! |
 Ethelflaed 2003-07-02 . chapter 5Me again! Sarcastic Wolf and Donovan have a lot in common, you know that? Heh.
Anyway . . . comments basically the same as before. Great story! You need longer chapters, though. Oh well. |
 Ethelflaed 2003-07-02 . chapter 4Nine . . . ten? (cracks up) I know this isn't a humor story, but I like that part! (grin grin)
Drake is pretty cool!
I would like to hear your explanation for the whole Lonely Mountain story if Smaug is misunderstood. (If I tell it to Mouself, she'll probably start a society dedicated to clearing Smaug's name . . . Mouself's obsessed with dragons.) |
 DaakuKitsune 2003-05-06 . chapter 5This story is great!! I just love it!! I also really like Drake, she's really cool. And I agree that Smaug was a misunderstood character. Anyway this story is great! It's definatly going on my favs! |
 Blueraven64 2003-04-13 . chapter 5Oies!! Continuecontinuecontinue! And read my new fic, The Icetor Spire Mage School! |
 Danfred 2003-03-25 . chapter 5Lovely story! Did Drake ever see Smaug again after the first time? Oh, and will the Fellowship ever know about the two followers? Please update ASAP! |
 Okie 2003-03-20 . chapter 1Hey Griffin! I still like your story (I hope you will update soon) but I was wondering if you liked the idea of Vitralth and Sephonee getting together in my story. Just wondering cause I'm not sure if I will keep what I wrote in Chapter 6. Well please give me your advice (I know it will be good cause of this story).
ttfn
Okie |
 Elenya2 2003-03-18 . chapter 5hey I like the premise of your story. I loved Gandalf counting. It was funny. I wonder when they'll actually come to the attention of the fellowship. Probably only when necessity demands it right? Anyway, thanks for reviewing my story as well. good luck on Dragon of Moonfire |
 icy878 2003-03-17 . chapter 5omgosh...she was gonna die for him...aw...please write more soon...its really good so far |
 Okie 2003-03-15 . chapter 5I thought it was a good story, but i also agree that legolas was portrayed as one of the best fighters and you make it sound like he is helpless. but anyway keep up the good work! |
 megan 2003-03-15 . chapter 1 It think it was very good. |
 cestari 2003-03-01 . chapter 2 You make it sound like Legolas couldn't fight to save his life, and is a stupid idiot. I don't even know if it's possible for an elf to be stupid, and after living for a couple thousand years even the weakest person could defend themselves way better than the average person. I suggest you chance that bit, cuz there are a lot of Legolas fans out there. Including me. |
 draonangel 2003-02-21 . chapter 1 great story
i think that smaug was missunder stod in the hobbit i felt so sad when he died:_:
power to the dragons!
HAHAHAHHAHAHA:) |
 Elenya2 2003-02-20 . chapter 2Alright, I'll bite what's up with the hobbit lass? I must admit most people have only extra humans or elves at the council, this is the first time I have heard the use of another hobbit. And I'm a little curious about your interpretation of Smaug. But I like your story so far. :) ~Elenya |
 Violetlight 2003-02-20 . chapter 2I really like this story so far. I like Drake, as an original character, who isn't head over heals in love with Legolas, and I love the fact you made Smaug more than just a monster. I hope you write more about my fave Tolkien dragon! Write more soon! |