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| Bob the Viking 2005-05-12 ch 2, | abuseDear fellow Author (narie the waitress) Hello and greetings. Just finished 'When She Woke AT Dawn', and it is a good read. If you need inspiration for continuing this story you should do some searching on the web for alternate histories. Two sites that may help you out with continuing this story are and , I by the way had to search through a great many websites before encountering those two sites (it literaly took days of searching). Well, anyway, i would like it very much if you could please continue with this story, I would like very much to see where you will be taking it. Good Luck, Keep Writing, and Have Fun! |
| Ceila 2003-02-20 ch 2, | abuseI really like this. I'd love to get a peek at your notes but I'll just wait patiently. So how did usagi and the rest get covered in the ice? If you're looking for a good place to find a quote try w.quoteland.com it's one of my favorites. |
| Kimmi-chan 2003-02-19 ch 1, | abuseP.S I agree with you on making Usagi 22. Making her 27 would make her too mature and too ready, and I (as a reader) would like to see her trials and tribulations occur at an age where things are more new, less familliar (you know, seeing how she starts off without any experience). Making her 22 is the best age for Usagi to start the story. |
| Kimmi-chan 2003-02-19 ch 2, | abuseThis sounds amazing so far. you went very in depth and it almsot sounded believable (that in just a few short years earth would actually undergo the great freze), which sent chills down my spine (lol, no pun intended lol)! I realy hope the next chapter comes out soon, I'm loving it so far, can't wait for more! -kimmi-chan |
| Marni 2003-02-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis story is very exciting! |
| stargirl5 2003-02-19 ch 2, | abuseOh, like your view on that ice period, how it came about and everythng. Like to see where you go with it :) |
| Sidekickwannabe 2003-02-19 ch 2, | abuseOkay, this is fabulous. ^_~ |