|Reviews for Betrothed to the Enemy|
| xXxeternally yoursxXx 12/14/08 . chapter 16
this story is so good i LOVE it, please update (insert pouty pleading face here) pretty please?
| Ellyanah 10/3/08 . chapter 16
Hilarious, and sensual. I love it.
PLEASE update, its So good.
Plus you are only missing a chapter or two.
Please *puppy dog eyes*
Your writting style is great by the way.
| IluvSmallvilleDBZSailormoon 5/22/08 . chapter 16
Are you serious. I read this story a long time ago on anothr site...and I've been looking for it for YEARS and now I fine it and its...incomplete. I could cry. Please...I beg you. Come back to this story...PLEASE!
| Inarae 5/14/08 . chapter 16
He. Fun story
| blackheart4life 4/10/08 . chapter 16
ahh man your story is genius. I am so sad it isn't complete because I honestly love it. It's a hilarious and sexy Chlex :D I really wish it would've been complete, but as it is it's wonderful _!
| Ultrawoman 7/28/07 . chapter 16
Aaw, I just sat and read all sixteen chapters to this only to find that there is no more, no end! Since you started this in 2003 I seriously doubt you ever will write the end of this now, but I still liked to say that what there is here is excellent and I really enjoyed reading it :)
| Poseidon's Chickadee 7/11/07 . chapter 16
Okay you see, not only is cruelty against the law. It's a sin.
And unnatural cruelty such as this? Should be punished.
| Poseidon's Chickadee 7/11/07 . chapter 13
Cliche gay best friend who gets her a man, yet doesn't wear pink however, still fantasizes about David. M, Eric where have ya been all my life? lol
There are many things I could say about the limo scene but they usually end with me beating my head against my desk and wondering WHY Lex has yet to propose?
| Poseidon's Chickadee 7/11/07 . chapter 8
I love Eric already :-D
He's my kinda guy, too bad he's gay *Sighs*
I mean Sleep and Saturday's, hell just sleep in general is good.
Now if he loves coffee I'll be most upset lol
And I had a vision of Frodo as soon as I saw the name and read that he ate the phone. Can someone say peeing on suits and eating expensive shoes? I can. I just did :-P
Great chapter. And nice way of cutting Ms. Finch out of the picture
| Poseidon's Chickadee 7/11/07 . chapter 7
Art or the bedroom judo, indeed.
It was nice that you had them sort of calm and then ending it with him doing a verbal blunder. I am assuming Lex in this story already knows he wants to propose to Chloe so that means begging. And this I gotta see. I suggest embarresment and Mariachi band (sp?)
| Poseidon's Chickadee 7/11/07 . chapter 3
Forgot to mention last chapter *Sheepish expression*
Nice title :-)
| Poseidon's Chickadee 7/11/07 . chapter 2
You have the banter. What more can I ask?
And you even have the expressions down. I forgot to mention that, but the wide smirk Lex gave last chapter. I could just envision it! And her poking him on the chest so Chloe.
I must say dem dere some witty lines *wbg*
Can't wait to read the rest!
I so know this'll be a fave.
| Poseidon's Chickadee 7/11/07 . chapter 1
lmao! Oh, yes :-D
Pretty good at having them in character, I liked.
Even though I must admit you exagerated Lana and Clark a BIT much (notice I only said a bit)
| SeasonVelvet 9/18/06 . chapter 16
It can't end here!
What are you writers trying to do to me!
| Serenearts 6/8/06 . chapter 16
This was hilarious! Please update soon!