aw! that's so cute. although...why does lucius not notice draco comeing at him with a silver chair?

This was so perfect. I hadn't really considered Draco/Harry before - even as friends - but you nailed it. Really. Guh.

dude!
That was so good! I loved the writing style, I've always wanted to write like that. And I like how you don't tell us any background or anything, it's just in the moment. I think that's probably my favorite kind of one-shot, one that just goes with it.
It's really good & I loved the ending! And the part where they're laughing.
10/10 :D

you know, if you'd added the h/g ship this story would have been (on the common scale) an eleven. as it stands, it's only a ten.

thanks for the read.

I like how they're not really friends at all. Their relationship is so complicated. Fantastic work with this. Second person POV's tough to write.

~fd97

I have never reviewed this story, I've read it at least six times, and hell it's even on my favorite’s page. I guess I just assumed that I reviewed this story with out ever getting around to it. Well I'm here now, and I must say that there has never been a better story written in second person. This is not a hollow compliment, because I've read at least three fics and two actual novels written in second person. They were not at all good. But you are amazing, I have never read a more feasible Harry Draco friendship story, but at the same time, it's like nothing I could ever expect from J.K. Rowling. The best way to sum up your story in my mind is to think back to Rowling's prologue and remember the moment when Harry and Draco nod to each other. That is what this story is like. Keep writing.


Julie Long

REALLY good. You have such a peculiar way of putting things down. I like it a lot though.

I have never read anything like this before. It's good. Really good.

Oh.

Very nice.

The format was intriguing, the way it was ever-changing, and yet constantly the same.

Artfully haphazard, I must say.

Had you given a whole plot,

like:

whyhowwhenwheretheydecidedtobecomefriendsorthese"deep"momentswheretheirperspectiveoftheotherchangedcompletely

it would have been bearable...
but not as good.

Also,

I like how you didn't specify whose POV it was in each paragraph.

Somewhere in the back of my head, I had this niggling feeling that I was ((supposed)) to be figuring out who was actually talking.

But the only time the narrator mattered was when it was obvious.

It was dizzying.

I liked it.

Looks like it was fun to write.

Nice!
I really liked the idea of Harry and Draco being friends.
Awesome writing!

I'd just like to thank a usual slash-author for taking the time to write a friendship story between two very unlikely characters.

My slash OTP is most definitely H/D and I must say a friendship fic between these two that stays just as a platonic relationship, is few and far between.

As a shipper, one becomes numb to a story in which wild snogging isn't an expected plot device and hawt-boy-sex isn’t addressed in the third paragraph.

So I want to thank you again for writing this story, not only was it beautifully written (2nd person? 'tis love :) the sheer brilliance of the idea was what made this story spectacular.

hm...i think i skipped a bit in the middle coz i kinda don't understand the end. but...i will go and re-read and then understand it!!
i think yew are just a fabbity fab writer and yew should continue!! so...go, type more!! ::puppy eyes:: please?? lol
Love Heather xox

Sweet, (though even with the not-slashy warning, I kept expecting slash lurking around the corner> I think it must have got lost somewhere, because I'm sure it was invited to the party.

Loved it though: D

Ugh, I don't really know how to explain it - I just *liked it*, you know? I love the style, and it just *works*. There's really no other word for it, no other way to describe it - it just fits.

That made no sense whatsoever, but oh well. Good job. I commend you.

[Marin]

Wow, this was amazing! The words, the happenings, the descriptions. BUt most of all: the pacing. This is one fic that handles pacing woth mastery.