*smile*
I like this ^-^
It's a good sequel for "Ghost" and it was fun to read. It's interesting as well, that Touya actually was able to learn how to see Sai. I can imagin the spirit very well in his joy after that.
Problem with this sequel: Ghost could stand alone. (This story too, but...it's diffrent) After reading this one, I feel like I read the rolouge and the first chapter of something...bigger XD
I like the idea a lot, and I would love to read more ^^
The 'not-quite-Blind Go' was something that I read in an other fanfiction as well, but it didn't drop the fun I had ^^

YAY! Akira can see Sai! Amazing... I like the idea it took knowing what was there and a lot of concentration, but it was possible to use the Go board to come to see Sai...

I also like how Hikaru decided to prove his story... It works very well.

Well written! Fun read!

Loved this story!! Thanks so much!

So... Good...

It'd be really cool if this became an actual chaptered story! I hope you at least do another oneshot in this universe.

Great job! I've loved it to bits, I had never read a story in which Akira starts to see Sai... And the way Hikaru told the secret was so well-planned! Thank you!

This is nice 1sht story.Thanks for making it

This is an interesting and somewhat original concept, in terms of HnG. I would actually like to see a continuance of this idea, perhaps involving the events of Volumes 15-17 (In rough terms, Sai's disappearance and Hikaru's depression.) I'm sure given Touya's knowledge/potential to actually SEE Sai, Shindou's encounter with Touya would likely be very different.

cool so there was a sequel hope you write more of this!

Quite a nice collection of fictions you have here, I can't remember if I reviewed yet but just wanted to mention I found it a shame you had stopped posting.

Shindo took great pleasure in trying to lure him into loud arguments.
OMG, lol. That amused the hell outta me...


"Mom! You know that Touya is really good, right?"

"Of course, dear. That's why I thought he might like a
match. Don't worry. I'm sure he won't go too ** you
two."

"Umm ... Right Mom. Anyway, that's where we'll be
tomorrow, so if you need me you can call."
I liked that, too. :) :) Very believable, quite cute, and so fun!! I love your humor.

". . .You can't play go for a
living, you know."

This time Akira really did choke on his tea.

LOL! :) This is so~ fun.

You never know who
you'll have to impress with intelligent conversation."

Shindo laughed. "Then I'm doomed."

^^ your Hikaru is perfect.

"Everybody was trying to find out who I was. It was
creepy."

LOL! :) what a cute kid! But, yeah, adults really don't think about that sort of thing...maybe there being a reason for Sai not to reveal himself...geeze. Sometimes people are so selfish. *GRINS at the thought of Akira hearing that*
His reaction is much love.

...hah, one thing kids have over adults is their ability to believe in the unreal...that ghosts can exist, and that explanations can be 100% truth...
It's sad, in a way. Maybe it's not a bad thing? I don't know...I'm on the threshold of adulthood, myself, and I'm not trained in these sorts of things. But!
An adult, a doctor, say, would probably assume that Hikaru isn't functioning on a normal level (i.e. schizophrenic, or a high-functioning autistic child-- the ones who are geniuses in some areas and the opposite in another area...don't quote me, I'm not sure if this is right-- or something...), and see if they could get Hikaru to believe that 1) Sai isn't real, and 2) to accept reality as most people see it (i.e. there's no such thing as possession, and Hikaru is the only one in his brain).

...that'd be an interesting idea...if someone could follow through with it well enough. *Smiles* maybe I'll have to give it a go, and see if I can inspire someone else to do it better...

...er, I don't really know what kind of storyline that'd entail, either. *Blinks rapidly* what would the plot be?

...I don't supose you'd write it for me? *Hopeful* send me an email, or something, if you want help with research. :) *Wishful thinking?*
Mm, you're so good at the fantasy-bit, though...and getting us to believe that it is possible, true, and good. :) I like that feeling...I've just managed to confuse myself. *Sheepish*

But Akira's response, "There's no such thing." had me falling over. XD that, too, is Perfectly childish. To deny something point-blank...


"There's an article? I'm in it?" Shindo made a grab for
the magazine and began reading.
*LOVES Hikaru* so sweetly kiddish.

"I really said that."

"About *me*?"
CUTE. :) *loves on Hikaru some more*

Shindo shrugged and looked at Akira. "What? Kids
against geezers?"
^^ he's so wonderfully blunt, unthinking, and...perfect. *Sounds so redundant...*

Yes. I like your story. :) Thanks so much for sharing!

This is gorgeous! I really like this. I think you should continue with it. I'd really like to see when Akira could hear Sai. It would rock! Are you opposed to AkiHika? Because if you thought it was a good idea maybe you could write a multi-chaptered Akira/Hikaru fic after this one? Its your story though, so I don't have say. But yeah, you're an awesome writer and I hope you keep writing!

RoyalDemon,
Ariella

*squeel* xD

Yay you continued it!

Haha, I love how Touya describes Sai once he's able to see him. ^^ Gah, seeing Sai so happy makes me smile. XD I really love this kind-of series you have going here. The concept is awesome, and I would love to see more. ^^

~firedraygon97